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Topic: ~ twice on sunday
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Sun 12/09/12 04:38 PM
you tell me
'write poetry for you'
my muse backsup
contrary
slides away
pouting
writing is flow
it must,wait
it crosses me up
twice on sunday
its an orgasm
waiting to happen
wanting to happen
if im lucky
i get both
if i give you
this poem
will you take it
will you take it
will you take it
from me
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Sun 12/09/12 04:40 PM
it's sunday, so i read this twice.

sweet both times!

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou
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Sun 12/09/12 06:04 PM
flowers :thumbsup: flowers :thumbsup: flowers :thumbsup: flowers smitten
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Sun 12/09/12 07:04 PM
Woah. That's awesome. Great write!
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Mon 12/10/12 01:27 AM
I enjoyed the subtle implications in this write, teasing.. cool way with words.. :wink:
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Mon 12/10/12 06:03 AM
kc....sweet of you to write..

tazzops...flowerforyou

plastic_pancakes...i like the woah.....smile.

AthenaRose2...back at you,i may not always comment but i read.
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Mon 12/10/12 12:09 PM
flowerforyou
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Mon 12/10/12 08:34 PM
smokin flowerforyou
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Tue 12/11/12 04:45 AM
LAMom....flowerforyou
Up2Us...flowerforyou
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Fri 02/01/13 01:35 PM
Hope that he took it...
took waiting, took the love offered, in your own time..

I agree with PP... Genius.flowerforyou
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Fri 02/01/13 02:40 PM
Teditis...this poem came from writersblock.....not from which you write of..i thankyou for liking it.
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Fri 02/01/13 02:56 PM
Well, I ever said that I was perfct in my interpretations, haha.
Sorry for misreading... still enjoyed it.
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Fri 02/01/13 06:43 PM
flowerforyou The flow of poetry must open at its own time, in its' own way. It must feel right for it to happen. I agree it is like an orgasm waiting to happen, once it starts, you cannot stop til it is finished, and oh those feelings are so alive then!flowerforyou

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