I can’t even begin to describe
how great I really feel inside
for the first time in so very long
it’s okay to do everything wrong
no one’s looking over my shoulder
I have no qualms about getting older
if I want to leave everything a mess
no one can nag, or get me upset
instead of having to listen to gripe
I can sleep very peaceful at night
and waking up is such fun too
the first thing I do is talk to you
my life is so different since we met
I love always seeing you in my head
so even the times we cannot speak
you tell me you love me so devotedly
but even a whisper from your heart
won’t miss my ears when we’re apart
the joy I feel while being in your world
makes me so happy that I’m your girl
even in my fantasy you’ll always be
my Prince Charming, the man for me

© Athena Rose

02/05/13

Awesome one Ms Athena !
It is such a great thing to feel free !
YOU are the one who counts the most in your life
And finding happiness is the most wonderful of feelings
I am so happy for you as well
I enjoyed this piece very much !
YOU GO GIRL !




KiK

Sounds awesome... nice write.
The committee in my head keep humming...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-LqVOP1TS5k

Thank you KiK, yes, freedom makes life worth living... when we have no restrictions on what we can do and achieve, even the air is easier to breathe...

Okay T... I had myself pretty pumped up in the fantasy of this write, then I listen to this song, and reality gets me all sad again... ya can't be goin around bustin a girl's bubble like this... but.. I do like the song... and the feeling that goes along with it...

Well, that's what I'm here for... to fug-up your day, haha.
Er, mebbe more along the lines of expresessing my preception... add a little snippet of my own, past recollections, then move on.
(moving-on, being the key thing...)

I'll be the first in-line to admit that my "interpretation" of another's craft is merely that... and sometimes I talk too much.
But like you share what you share... I share what I share.

I never mean to take away from your work... if I do, I apologize.

AR, never forget that what you majic-out and show to us is your own... we, who look on just gather and glean through our own filters. If we get close; lovely.
If we're far off the mark... no big deal really. Just a lesson to the crafters that sometimes, "...words have two meanings...".

I think that from now on... I'll reduce my chatter to just things like.. "nice write"; "i liked it"... reduce me... praise you all.
My dialouge inside of your workmanship seems distracting...
Peace&Love.

Loved the feelings portrayed, Freedom, happiness, even if from a figment of our imagination. Sometimes pretending to be someone's girl has it's advantages. (sigh!)Kuddos to you for a great write!

T.. if you do that.. I'll have to divorce you... lol... I wasn't offended by your input, I was teasing you... if you can dish it out, you have to be able to take it too... I'm never upset by the way my work is interpreted because of how I create most of it... it comes from within, and often I don't even know its true meaning until others views explain to me what they see... not a lot of people take time to give an honest assessment.. so, plz.. don't close your eyes and limit your voice...

Dearest tproses... you know my feelings so well...

That's very sweet... and I thank-you for it.
When I studied a lil' bit of art... critique was just part of the courses.
"Critique": 1) review of somebody's work: a written or broadcast assessment of something, usually a creative work, with comments on its good and bad qualities.
I tend to leave the "good&bad" outta it... but I only intend to inspire.... never deminish.
I was taught... reveal what you feel.
Pass that along to the crafter and they may gain insight.
That way the crafter can work to their own ends... when they get a vignette of other people's POV, they adjust and tweek things as it suits them. (And can still do it all with a bit of crypicism. haha)

Nevertheless... while, it's important to me... yours ain't the voice, see? I hear others too... so I'll choose to limit.
(just saying so to give other peace-of-mind)

You can't divorce me anyway... I'm too special.

T.. if you do that.. I'll have to divorce you... lol... I wasn't offended by your input, I was teasing you... if you can dish it out, you have to be able to take it too... I'm never upset by the way my work is interpreted because of how I create most of it... it comes from within, and often I don't even know its true meaning until others views explain to me what they see... not a lot of people take time to give an honest assessment.. so, plz.. don't close your eyes and limit your voice...

That's very sweet... and I thank-you for it.
When I studied a lil' bit of art... critique was just part of the courses.
"Critique": 1) review of somebody's work: a written or broadcast assessment of something, usually a creative work, with comments on its good and bad qualities.
I tend to leave the "good&bad" outta it... but I only intend to inspire.... never deminish.
I was taught... reveal what you feel.
Pass that along to the crafter and they may gain insight.
That way the crafter can work to their own ends... when they get a vignette of other people's POV, they adjust and tweek things as it suits them. (And can still do it all with a bit of crypicism. haha)

Nevertheless... while, it's important to me... yours ain't the voice, see? I hear others too... so I'll choose to limit.
(just saying so to give other peace-of-mind)

You can't divorce me anyway... I'm too special.


Yes, T, I do see... I think I see some of that insanity you referred too earlier... with all the other voices you hear you might not hear mine too clearly... lol...

Nice write......Happy for you too!

Nice write......Happy for you too!

That's very sweet... and I thank-you for it.
When I studied a lil' bit of art... critique was just part of the courses.
"Critique": 1) review of somebody's work: a written or broadcast assessment of something, usually a creative work, with comments on its good and bad qualities.
I tend to leave the "good&bad" outta it... but I only intend to inspire.... never deminish.
I was taught... reveal what you feel.
Pass that along to the crafter and they may gain insight.
That way the crafter can work to their own ends... when they get a vignette of other people's POV, they adjust and tweek things as it suits them. (And can still do it all with a bit of crypicism. haha)

Nevertheless... while, it's important to me... yours ain't the voice, see? I hear others too... so I'll choose to limit.
(just saying so to give other peace-of-mind)

You can't divorce me anyway... I'm too special.


Yes, T, I do see... I think I see some of that insanity you referred too earlier... with all the other voices you hear you might not hear mine too clearly... lol...


Your inclusion into my delusion isn't necessary... but thanks sweetie!

Thank you, Solace...

Yes, T, I do see... I think I see some of that insanity you referred too earlier... with all the other voices you hear you might not hear mine too clearly... lol...


Your inclusion into my delusion isn't necessary... but thanks sweetie!


anytime... it's been fun..

Insanity? haha.... yes, always fun
Sleep well.

Especially when shared...