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Fluid Lines
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Very good I like this one a lot
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Drunken Midnight
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Wow that was powerful
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Memories
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I find myself telling my kids the stories my great gran father told me of the town my family is from. It's only a few miles from us and I think it's important for them to know our heritage. Morning walks or hikes are the best I think. Thank you for sharing
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Topic:
Freedom
Edited by
Unknow
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Fri 07/25/14 02:16 PM
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Thank you plastic pancakes I appreciate your feedback
Thank you up2us that made my day |
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embrace the heart
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~Pink Solaris
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That's great, thank you for sharing
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Freedom
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Thank you
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Topic:
Freedom
Edited by
Unknow
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Thu 07/24/14 10:02 PM
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Sitting against J. Hopkins tombstone, a late 1700s freed slave. To my left lies his wife Ella, God she sure was brave
At my feet are the headstones, of all her babies graves. I'm watching a bat dance against the dusks, pink yellow white and blue twilight sky I can feel its anticipation, as i'm sure it can feel mine. There's a owl hooting, in the woods not far from me. I can hear it in his voice, he knows we'll soon be free But not for the day birds, in their prison they will sleep. As the frogs and crickets chirps, comes from what seem to be all around. The sky begins to blacken, as i lay my white candle down The deer grazing in the field, celebrate without a sound. Now i light my candle, whos light the headstones seem to bar. I thank God for the country sky, that boast so many stars. But no i'm still not free, no not thus far AAH theres my freedom, as i reach for my guitar W.A.M. |
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Mothers Day
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take care
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Mothers Day
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I hope everyone has a happy Mothers Day
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Happy Easter
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Just wanted to wish everyone in the poetry & creative writing community a happy Easter and if you don't celebrate it may you have a wonderful day.
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Soldado Of Fortune
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Wow that was really great You should find a publisher i think you would do great!
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Never Meant To Be
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nicely written
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Topic:
No One
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beautiful
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We Tarry
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Very good Sadie always a pleasure to read your work (tea)
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"Wyatt"
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congrads on the new addition. He's adorable and lucky to have a special granmom like you
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rate me...why not
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I agree with buuldog
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Is there an I?
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in the sociaty we live in and the era in which we live in it is next to impossible to do almost anything original considering everything that has already been done Reality is what you create, Never forget your power to actuate, That which you wish to see, Life then becomes a constant jubilee. Society only has the power you choose to give it. I agree 100% |
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Is there an I?
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in the sociaty we live in and the era in which we live in it is next to impossible to do almost anything original considering everything that has already been done It is always possible..Never say never.. |
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