thank you very much TxsGal i only wish i could write half as good as you

nice write i like it

you are an awesome writer

thank you

great write i like it a lot

I will try too

I added to this one. you all said good things about it but it didn't go over very well at other places.


As I lie here,
with my eyes closed,
dreaming about you,
and the last words you chose.

After five years,
without so much as a fight,
and how everything,
felt just so right.

Our love, our love,
will forever be,
"so you said"
growing, growing,
like branches on a tree.

How could it be?
where did it end?
please tell me, please tell me.

As I lie here,
with my eyes closed,
dreaming about you,
and the last words you chose.

Why are they so cruel?
why are they so mean?
I did nothing wrong,
I wish this was all a dream.

Our love, our love,
will forever be,
"so you said"
in death, in death,
your love will still grow with me.

How could this be,
we where so happy,
wont you tell me, wont you tell me.

As I lie here with my eye's closed,
dreaming about you,
and the last words you chose.

You just need some time,
you just need a break,
how could I have known,
those words were just fake.

Our love, our love,
will forever be,
"so you said"
a lie, a lie,
that was made just for me.

How could this be,
that I still love you so,
trying to let go, trying to let go.

Now I lie awake,
thinking about you,
and how you where my mistake.

Its been almost a year,
I gave you my last tear,
its time I let go,
I just wanted you to know.

Our love, our love,
will forever be,
"so you said"
its over, its over,
I'v opend my eyes and now i see.



the real truth,
you cheated on me.

I remember our love,
how it felt so true,
how happy we where,
all those years with you,

Right from the start,
you touched my heart,
you filled my life with joy,
i felt again like a school boy,

Are lives together,
are love was so strong,
it was to last forever,
never to go wrong,

but here I am,
1200 miles away,
alone again,
and i just wanted to say,

I hope you are loving him so,
to the point you can't let go,
and someone takes him away,
and leaves your life in disarray,

i sure will try that one just came to me when i was at work so i wrote it down lol ill see what tomarrow bring

thank you, im glad u like and feel it

im sorry that u can relate to it but glad u love it

ill try to keep them comming

sure its in the shed next to the bloody chain saw lol

perfect world by simple plan

This is my first poem ever so here it goes


As I lie here,
with my eyes closed,
dreaming about you,
and the last words you chose.

After five years,
without so much as a fight,
and how everything,
felt just so right.

Our love, our love,
will forever be,
"so you said"
growing, growing,
like branches on a tree.

How could it be?
where did it end?
please tell me, please tell me.

As I lie here,
with my eyes closed,
dreaming about you,
and the last words you chose.

Why are they so cruel?
why are they so mean?
I did nothing wrong,
I wish this was all a dream.

Our love, our love,
will forever be,
"so you said"
BULL SH**, BULL SH**,
I cut down that f***in tree.

How could this be,
how could you do this to me,
now I know the truth,
you cheated on me.

yes i do they have some good songs

THIS ONE IS FROM "UNDEROATHE"


Alone In December

You always amazed me
But thats the past
I kept silent and it rained for days
My inside were drenched
But I guess that's the part of growing up
I never wanted to learn
And I grew into the man
That you never knew
But I wouldn't be this way
If it wasn't for you
100 thank you's
It this is love
Fairy tales never came true
Judies are black in full bloom
And I died in the womb
Take it back, all that's gone
It's all still there like you left it
December stayed the same
Nothing ever changed but you
Every little dream covered in dents
Love can't fly tonight
Couples will rest, I'll be sleepless
So cry yourself to sleep
This is about broken hearts
This is about me
Bending again for nothing
I'd run to you but pain awaits
I'm coming home
But I'll be late
No deeper than imagination can be
Sight with nothing to see
What's faith if I can't believe
It's everything
A cure, but I make it a disease

God take me because I hate me

here are a couple more good songs from

THE CALLING

SONG ONE

Wherever you will go


So lately, been wondering
Who will be there to take my place
When I'm gone you'll need love to light the shadows on your face
If a great wave shall fall and fall upon us all
Then between the sand and stone, could you make it on your own
If I could, then I would,
I'll go wherever you will go
Way up high or down low, I'll go wherever you will go
And maybe, I'll find out
A way to make it back someday
To watch you, to guide you, through the darkest of your days
If a great wave shall fall and fall upon us all
Then I hope there's someone out there
Who can bring me back to you


Run away with my heart
Run away with my hope
Run away with my love
I know now, just quite how,
My life and love may still go on
In your heart, in your mind, I'll stay with you for all of time






SONG TWO

Could it be any harder


You left me with goodbye and open arms
A cut so deep I don't deserve
You were always invincible in my eyes
The only thing against us now is time


Could it be any harder to say goodbye and without you,
Could it be any harder to watch you go, to face what's true
If I only had one more day
I lie down and blind myself with laughter
A quick fix of hope is what I'm needing
And how I wish that I could turn back the hours
But I know I just don't have the power


I'd jump at the chance,
We'd drink and we'd dance
And I'd listen close to your every word,
As if it's your last, I know it's your last,
Cause today, oh, you're gone


Like sand on my feet,
The smell of sweet perfume
You stick to me forever
And I wish you didn't go
I wish you didn't go, I wish you didn't go away
To touch you again,
With life in your hands,
It couldn't be any harder.. harder.. harder

by THE CALLING



Unstoppable


Come and lay right on my bed, sit and drink some wine
I'll try not to make you cry
And if you get inside my head, then you'd understand
Then you'd understand me
Why I've felt so alone, why I kept myself from love
And you became my favorite drug
So let me take you right now and swallow you down,
I need you inside


Chorus:
If we had this night together
If we had a moment to ourselves
If we had this night together, then we'd be unstoppable
Do you think that this right, or is it really wrong
I know that this is what we've been wanting
And all this burning in my soul, it fills up to my throat
It fills up 'till my heart is breaking


Chorus
Now, we can both learn
Somehow, you'll see it's all we have
Love, it keeps us together
And I need love
When I wake up without you, knowing you're not there
I'm only feeling half as good
Well I'm gonna find a way
To wrap you in my arms, you make me feel alive

by TAKING BACK SUNDAY


"New American Classic"

"We've got to get better," I said, "It's all in your head."
We could live through these letters or forget it all together
See the months they don't matter it's the days I can't take
When the hours move to minutes and I'm seconds away

Just ask the question come untie the knot
Say you won't care, say you won't care
Retrace the steps as if we forgot
Say you won't care, say you won't care
Try to avoid it but there's not a doubt
And there's one thing I can do nothing about

When all that we need is just a reaction
It's too much to ask for when there's no attraction anymore
If chasing our dreams is just a distraction
I want to remember when I know that I can't go back

Just ask the question come untie the knot
Say you won't care, say you won't care
Retrace the steps as if we forgot
Say you won't care, say you won't care
Try to avoid it (try to avoid it) but there's not a doubt
There's one thing I can do nothing
There's one thing I can do nothing
There's one thing I can do nothing about.

Just ask the question (just ask the question) come untie the knot
Say you won't care, say you won't care
Retrace the steps (retrace the steps) as if we forgot
Say you won't care, say you won't care
Try to avoid it (try to avoid it) but there's not a doubt
And there's one thing I can do nothing
There's one thing I can do nothing
There's one thing I can do nothing about.

here is anouther good one

by SIMPLE PLAN

"Perfect World"

I never could’ve seen this far
I never could’ve seen this coming
Seems like my world’s falling apart

Yeah

Why is everything so hard
I don’t think I can deal with the things you said
It just won’t go away

In a perfect world
This could never happen
In a perfect world
You’d still be here
And it makes no sense
I could just pick up the pieces
But to you
This means nothing
Nothing at all

I used to think that I was strong
Until the day it all went wrong
I think I need a miracle to make it through

Yeah

I wish that I could bring you back
I wish that I could turn back time
Cuz I can’t let go
I just can’t find my way
Yeah
Without you I just can’t find my way

In a perfect world
This could never happen
In a perfect world
You’d still be here
And it makes no sense
I could just pick up the pieces
But to you
This means nothing
Nothing at all

I don’t know what I should do now
I don’t know where I should go
I’m still here waiting for you
I’m lost when you’re not around
I need to hold on to you
I just can’t let you go

Yeah
Yeah

In a perfect world
This could never happen
In a perfect world
You’d still be here
And it makes no sense
I could just pick up the pieces
But to you
This means nothing
Nothing at all
Nothing, nothing at all
Nothing at all

u 2 like sobby songs here is u for u

its by "SIMPLE PLAN"
TITLE How could this happen to me



I open my eyes
I try to see but I’m blinded by the white light
I can’t remember how
I can’t remember why
I’m lying here tonight

And I can’t stand the pain
And I can’t make it go away
No I can’t stand the pain

How could this happen to me
I made my mistakes
I’ve got no where to run
The night goes on
As I’m fading away
I’m sick of this life
I just wanna scream
How could this happen to me

Everybody’s screaming
I try to make a sound but no one hears me
I’m slipping off the edge
I’m hanging by a thread
I wanna start this over again

So I try to hold onto a time when nothing mattered
And I can’t explain what happened
And I can’t erase the things that I’ve done
No I can’t

How could this happen to me
I made my mistakes
I’ve got no where to run
The night goes on
As I’m fading away
I’m sick of this life
I just wanna scream
How could this happen to me

I made my mistakes
I’ve got no where to run
The night goes on
As I’m fading away
I’m sick of this life
I just wanna scream
How could this happen to me


i hope u 2 like it