You're so slow!!!!

Great write, from an old soul (yeah, we can recognize each other)

Excellent work brother, excellent



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It's here, but PLEASE nobody post in that thread, post in this one all you wish. Thanks-

http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/92167

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Awwwww, ty. Dont forget the showcase has all poems up to date if you want to skip the comments (not as much fun, but faster). It's on my profile.

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Thank you SO MUCH! You're the best ((((LaMom))))

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Hehe, well, you're welcome to come in and use your faces anytime you want, hehe, just don't expect a reply unless I understand why.

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Dunno, just seems an odd face to put up without saying anything, so I didn't quite understand what you were trying to communicate.

LMFAO!!!!!

Glad you enjoyed it hon, really am. Figured you'd like a bit of a twist....and well...that's as twisted as I could get it lol


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Do I scare you?

Well, ONE of those is for you. Talk to Mr. Multi-Challenge up there ^^^^^^


LOL

~Den

LMAO!!!!!!!

Awwww, thank you for writing such a sweet poem about me!! Very nice flow there btw

~Den

Hey you all know me well enough that you have TELL me you want it to be serious or I simply let my deranged mind decide how the story goes



~Den

Stars In Your Eyes

In my silent, solid black outfit, I quietly slide down the way
I slip by the moving cameras to gain access to the door I’m seeking
I slide my eyes into the room and see the gem for which I will be so well paid
Carefully, I precisely use my tools and quickly unlock the secure door
I inhale a deep breath, knowing what to expect; an alarm, a room full of smoke, tear gas reeking
Knowing there is nothing to fear, until my feet land on the floor
My escape route perfect, I have but one guard whom I must bypass
I do a double flip, pulling out my sword in midair, I slice the protective case
Reaching in, I acquire the gem and quickly escape from the gas
I open my eyes and 47 seconds left to escape, I must use all of my wits and speed
30 seconds, time is running low; a guard comes directly towards me
I reach into my pouch pulling out my stars, I’d really hoped for another way
I fling my stars into both of his eyes, his life I took from him this day
I sell the gem to my employer for the highly negotiated price
With the profit I made, off of a single deal, I’ll spend the rest of my life in paradise

© Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

Thank you brother

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Tell ya what I WILL do. I'll put yours in as every other, so you get the next one- which is...........

#2. What Do I Do? What Do I Do?
#3. Falling in love from a distance
#4. Down in the backside of my heart

I wrote it for you, Ms. Two faced LL LL LL

Stars In Your Eyes

In my silent, solid black outfit, I quietly slide down the way
I slip by the moving cameras to gain access to the door I’m seeking
I slide my eyes into the room and see the gem for which I will be so well paid
Carefully, I precisely use my tools and quickly unlock the secure door
I inhale a deep breath, knowing what to expect; an alarm, a room full of smoke, tear gas reeking
Knowing there is nothing to fear, until my feet land on the floor
My escape route perfect, I have but one guard whom I must bypass
I do a double flip, pulling out my sword in midair, I slice the protective case
Reaching in, I acquire the gem and quickly escape from the gas
I open my eyes and 47 seconds left to escape, I must use all of my wits and speed
30 seconds, time is running low; a guard comes directly towards me
I reach into my pouch pulling out my stars, I’d really hoped for another way
I fling my stars into both of his eyes, his life I took from him this day
I sell the gem to my employer for the highly negotiated price
With the profit I made, off of a single deal, I’ll spend the rest of my life in paradise

© Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

It was truly, honestly my pleasure. I hope everyone enjoys it as much as you!!!!!



~Den

LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!

Only you would think to do that hahaha, ok "Stars in your eyes" is #1

Great write! , but don't forget to teach them that when a ballgame is on, they should keep a cold beer in front of you at all times.............

*DUCKS AND RUNS FOR COVER*

~Den

Ok, I'm ready for more challenges. Lets do the first five this time. I'd like to see some new faces make a request- if it's been lost in translation, basically, you give a word or a sentence and I challenge myself to create a poem around it.

~Den