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Fri 03/14/08 08:05 AM
As the Eagle Soars

As the Eagle soars so high above, floating on the sky
He looks down, eyes concentrated, and then begins to dive
The tiny figures he sees below soon begin to grow
Gracefully he glides just a top the water, headed for his prey
In one fell swoop he grabs a fish, and then he’ll fly away
Enjoying his meal, he decides on seconds and back aloft he goes
He’ll yank another fish out with those claws he has for toes
The fish is just swimming along, minding his own business, but so the circle goes

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Fri 03/14/08 07:49 AM
(((Cyn))) flowerforyou

A void only One can fill

When things were high in my life, I never felt a need
To come to you and tell you thanks, or even ask you please
Then times got bad and finally I bowed down before you and asked you to forgive
You lightened my heart in the blink of an eye, you forgave all my sins
You were the void that I could not fill with drugs, sex, booze or pills
But when You forgave me, I felt the void disappear, my life was now fulfilled

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Fri 03/14/08 07:37 AM
Twice Baked Virgins

I went to hang out with some friends and found myself at a party
We sat around drinking, smoking, laughing, the weed was hearty
The more we sat and smoked and talked, secret details were revealed
Some needed just to talk things out, and then found that they were healed
Other info was also told, which brought to my face such a big grin
Two of the ladies in the room, sitting next to me were both untouched virgins
I smoked them up another time, twice now they’d been baked
I took them both up to my room, having ice cream AND cake
The experience was delightful; we had all had lots of fun
Until one of the virgin’s Father walked in with a gun
Running down the street half clothed, now that part WASN’T fun!

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Fri 03/14/08 07:34 AM

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou They both are good smooched smooched


*takes a bow* Thank you so much!
flowerforyou flowerforyou
~Den

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Fri 03/14/08 07:24 AM

Another great one...sigh..You really are a tremendous writer.


Thank you so much. Know a publisher? LOL


~D

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Fri 03/14/08 07:19 AM
Why does it hurt, when I feel no pain?

I stand here in the cold rain, tears streaming down my face
Never thought I’d find myself, standing here in this place
I look up at your bedroom as the rain begins to pound
Rain has me covered from head to toe, I cannot hear a sound
I took my own life, to escape the hell of losing my sweet Elaine
I shouldn’t be able to feel, so why does it hurt when I can feel no pain?

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Fri 03/14/08 07:19 AM

"Take me to higher places" this one my friend was awesome great writebigsmile flowerforyou bigsmile



(((TXG)))flowerforyou happy flowerforyou

I'm really glad that you enjoyed it!

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Fri 03/14/08 07:18 AM

WOW...I'm speechless! That doesn't happen very often!

TREMENDOUS!


You have me to the point of blushing now. Hehe, Thank you so very much for your kind words flowerforyou

~Den

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Fri 03/14/08 07:17 AM

Bravo my friend... ((((( Den )))))) I have so enjoyed reading each and everyone,,, I am in awe once again

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

such an incredible way to wake up



Thank you very much ((((LaMom))). I always appreciate you taking time to read my writes flowerforyou

~Den

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Fri 03/14/08 06:40 AM
Edited by Sitngrin on Fri 03/14/08 06:44 AM

have a new one..
take me to higher places..



Take me to higher places

Armageddon had begun, due to their strength, some were chosen to fight
Others, due to their speed, were chosen to carry souls to heaven by flight
Massive explosions abound as Angels and Demons fought for the souls
I had flown down quicker and quicker and had thus far retrieved the most
Let it not be misunderstood that I had done this alone, and I had no time to boast
Though immortal, we still could lose our existence and He had to orchestrate
It would be thousands of years before his fallen Angels he could recreate
The risks were high, but bound by an Oath, we went on and did our job
I was sent to retrieve the soul of a mother and her child amongst a mob
Carrying one soul could be taxing enough, but I could not let that child be destroyed
I swept in with all my speed, grabbed them both in my arms and started to retreat
I felt the pain of heat on my back, but I had to get them to heaven, my task I had to complete
I took her higher and higher, her blue eyes starring into mine as my vision blurred
I set her and her two year old down by the pearly gates, then suddenly it occurred
I looked behind me and saw my wings were destroyed and I would soon lie dead
She looked deep into my eyes, and my last image before I went was her kissing my forehead


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Thu 03/13/08 11:19 PM

Not a problem at all Den...
You gotta check something out tho...
Look at 300 dollars, in the regular poetry posts. (please)


Incredible man, incredible

~Den

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Thu 03/13/08 11:11 PM

Lol... Man, where was this post yesterday? J/k...
Good to know where your at Den... Been getting real tired of reading your "air" poetry... lmao...
(you know, if you mis-spell lmao... you might accidentally type, lamo.)
That could give the wrong impression!


LMAO

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Thu 03/13/08 11:05 PM
Wow.............That's all I can get out of my mouth. I'm in AWE

GREAT JOB MY FRIEND!


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Thu 03/13/08 09:39 PM

Ok Den.... I want you to know that I read the entire thread, and I'm all caught up now... (took like 30-40 minutes) which is nothing, compared to how fast you wrote them...
The most that I can say Den,
which is saying a lot for me,
Is,
That I would like to meet you someday... really would.



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Wow....you're an impressive person FC. You are blessed with an aura of positively along with Vinny that truly do bring one's day up. I appreciate that you took all that time to read and compliment me, being such a talented poet yourself. Thank you.


*- Extends his hand and gives him a hug -*

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Thu 03/13/08 09:36 PM

Sit, Stay! :wink: laugh drinker


devil mad I've fought bigger bears than you mad devil

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Thu 03/13/08 09:36 PM

cool man, goin good i hope, i'll definitely check it outdrinker drinker drinker


Yup it is, ty V

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Thu 03/13/08 09:24 PM


1... more professional.


Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Damn now I get it,, Hmmmmmmmmmmm old age is settin in... laugh laugh laugh laugh

1 blushing


Thanks guys, I appreciate the feedback. Midlife crisis I guess lmao. I better get to writing or I'll be backed up for weeks lol.

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Thu 03/13/08 09:17 PM
I'll make this easier:


1 ~Den or 2. ~Den~ looks cooler


Just type 1 or 2 and hit send laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh

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Thu 03/13/08 08:49 PM
I was thinking of making it ~Den~, what do you guys think? Please reply only in poetry mode. :-D

Almost Spring upon us, close to my birthday
I had an odd thought, not quite normal, somehow I'm lead astray
And now we simply must indulge our thoughts and emotion

Now then, pick 1. ~Den 2. ~Den~

So you write your pick, any format is welcome, now, cause some commotion!

D.E.N.

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Thu 03/13/08 06:07 PM
Pinky - Take me to higher places.. Will be done

FC - Why does it hurt, when I don't feel any pain?
- Twice baked virgins Both will be done

Cyn - The Endless Void Never To Be Filled But By One. Will be done

For my Texan - As the Eagle Soars

Sorry, haven't gotten started, been a very busy day. I'll crank out what I can tonight. Thanks guys!

~Den