| Topic: Slaps In the Face | |
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Puddles of despair leave them alone, I watch as they grow.
Humblest of beginnings start where most are afraid to go. Duplicity can end the journey too soon for eager beavers. I’m fascinated by the amazing shear luck of some non-believers. Good does reward in time, not always bad to finish last. Some dead set on crossing the line first often move too fast. They miss much in this rush set by their impatient pace. They’re quick to touch a ladies waist without even seeing her face. Astounded is the boyish reaction when his behavior’s taken as a threat. For knowledge of how to approach a lady, he has not quite acquired as of yet. It may never be attained by some of my brethren but this needn’t be the case. Early and often we should teach our male children to respect females. This can lead to far fewer incidents of slaps in the face. |
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Yes teach the children young!
Absoulutely wonderful write (((brwnkimba)))
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Thank you for being a teacher of tomorrow's men!
My respect to you...
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Awwww so true to teach them from childhood to respect a woman will result in them growing into a gentelman later in life.
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Respect taught at a young age... makes all the difference in the world,,,
goes both ways
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Great write!
, but don't forget to teach them that when a ballgame is on, they should keep a cold beer in front of you at all times.............
*DUCKS AND RUNS FOR COVER* ~Den |
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Great write! , but don't forget to teach them that when a ballgame is on, they should keep a cold beer in front of you at all times.............
*DUCKS AND RUNS FOR COVER* ~Den Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh your soooooooooooooooooooo not right see that is why I want one that is not struck dumb when sports are on lmao
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Thank you all so very much and we can all teach the correct way.
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Top of the line poetry... A great story, written to a good structure, a great pass, and totally in-depth thinking!
And nothing like a humorous ending. Your poetry is rock steady! Thanks! |
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Starting to feel like Chip and Dale with the comps my brotha.
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nice write and so true
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Hey P.K. thank you and very nice to hear from you.
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great flow read right through
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, but don't forget to teach them that when a ballgame is on, they should keep a cold beer in front of you at all times.............
