Topic: Slaps In the Face
brwnkimba's photo
Sun 03/16/08 10:57 AM
Puddles of despair leave them alone, I watch as they grow.
Humblest of beginnings start where most are afraid to go.
Duplicity can end the journey too soon for eager beavers.
I’m fascinated by the amazing shear luck of some non-believers.
Good does reward in time, not always bad to finish last.
Some dead set on crossing the line first often move too fast.
They miss much in this rush set by their impatient pace.
They’re quick to touch a ladies waist without even seeing her face.
Astounded is the boyish reaction when his behavior’s taken as a threat.
For knowledge of how to approach a lady, he has not quite acquired as of yet.
It may never be attained by some of my brethren but this needn’t be the case.
Early and often we should teach our male children to respect females.
This can lead to far fewer incidents of slaps in the face.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 03/16/08 11:37 AM
Yes teach the children young!
Absoulutely wonderful write (((brwnkimba))) flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Sun 03/16/08 11:41 AM
Thank you for being a teacher of tomorrow's men!
My respect to you...flowerforyou flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 03/16/08 01:16 PM
Awwww so true to teach them from childhood to respect a woman will result in them growing into a gentelman later in life. bigsmile

LAMom's photo
Sun 03/16/08 03:24 PM
Respect taught at a young age... makes all the difference in the world,,, bigsmile goes both ways

Sitngrin's photo
Sun 03/16/08 03:33 PM
Great write! drinker , but don't forget to teach them that when a ballgame is on, they should keep a cold beer in front of you at all times.............

*DUCKS AND RUNS FOR COVER*

~Den

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 03/16/08 04:14 PM

Great write! drinker , but don't forget to teach them that when a ballgame is on, they should keep a cold beer in front of you at all times.............

*DUCKS AND RUNS FOR COVER*

~Den



Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh your soooooooooooooooooooo not right noway noway noway noway noway noway noway see that is why I want one that is not struck dumb when sports are on lmao laugh laugh laugh laugh :tongue: :tongue: :tongue: smokin

brwnkimba's photo
Sun 03/16/08 05:25 PM
Thank you all so very much and we can all teach the correct way.

FroznChild's photo
Sun 03/16/08 06:20 PM
Top of the line poetry... A great story, written to a good structure, a great pass, and totally in-depth thinking!
And nothing like a humorous ending.
Your poetry is rock steady!
Thanks!

brwnkimba's photo
Mon 03/17/08 07:15 AM
Starting to feel like Chip and Dale with the comps my brotha.laugh

pkh's photo
Mon 03/17/08 07:17 AM
flowerforyou nice write and so true

brwnkimba's photo
Tue 03/18/08 04:37 PM
Hey P.K. thank you and very nice to hear from you.flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 03/18/08 04:44 PM
great flow read right through