Topic: Wording Trust
Sharris's photo
Sun 03/23/08 09:33 PM
Wording Trust

I see your words.
Do you hear mine?
Protected deeply, veiled.
Hidden in the billowed,creased
Lace and silk that yields.

Thoughts before I realized,
I was made aware,
Formed a heart of searching
Before and now, worn fear.

Open, standing unclothed
Afraid to jump right in
Cold the frozen waters,
Ice, your mind shagrinned.

Do you feel me shaking?
Quaking in my heart?
Open to just letting go
Embracing this new start.

Do you believe the words I write?
The thoughts I've penned and now?
I am learning trust, again.
And will you teach me how?

Raine Les 3/23/2008

pkh's photo
Sun 03/23/08 09:35 PM
I really liked that,it's sometime hard to trust again so happy you are doing that and moving forwardflowerforyou

brooke007's photo
Sun 03/23/08 09:47 PM
very nice...
inspired???

Sharris's photo
Sun 03/23/08 10:01 PM
Inspired?
Yes, I am in process. I feel that opening myself up to scrutiny will yield more growth. Is that what you mean?

Sitngrin's photo
Sun 03/23/08 10:41 PM
I really like good flow and you did a nice job of maintaining it. flowerforyou for you. Nice Write


~Den

Abracadabra's photo
Sun 03/23/08 10:59 PM
Very nice. flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 03/24/08 06:01 AM
flowerforyou happy flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 03/24/08 08:34 AM
You got your groove on with this one! Nice write!!flowerforyou flowerforyou