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Wording Trust
I see your words. Do you hear mine? Protected deeply, veiled. Hidden in the billowed,creased Lace and silk that yields. Thoughts before I realized, I was made aware, Formed a heart of searching Before and now, worn fear. Open, standing unclothed Afraid to jump right in Cold the frozen waters, Ice, your mind shagrinned. Do you feel me shaking? Quaking in my heart? Open to just letting go Embracing this new start. Do you believe the words I write? The thoughts I've penned and now? I am learning trust, again. And will you teach me how? Raine Les 3/23/2008 |
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I really liked that,it's sometime hard to trust again so happy you are doing that and moving forward
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very nice...
inspired??? |
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Inspired?
Yes, I am in process. I feel that opening myself up to scrutiny will yield more growth. Is that what you mean? |
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I really like good flow and you did a nice job of maintaining it.
![]() ~Den |
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Very nice.
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You got your groove on with this one! Nice write!!
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