so how was the poem and its your turn ro write now sorry didnt understand what you said if the poem was nice or not

your profile is nice and simple just put a bitmore smiling pic of yourself if you wish too and set a limit of age only those people can msg u and just post here in forums its an interesting place to find good friends and maybe love

hmm sunset let me think hehe
My life begins after sunset
people call me a ghost i dont know why
i look around in hope that somebody
will see me and set me free

my life begins after sunset
i dont know why people are afraid of me
i am nothing but a figment of their fantasy
a broken and corrupted soul
i want to make amends but
i think its too late
i have just one wish
that is to see the sunset
but how unfortunate i am
my life begins after sunset


well i dnt knw if its good but its what i could think of and your word is sacrifice :)

well your poem inspired me to write those few lines and i carved my feelings of heart down here and i hope you write a lot more it inspired me to write

Yes i believe so that i wish i could be able to stand still and let the bad phase of life pass away and well you have written a nice poem mine are just a few lines that came to my mind they are nothing compared to your beautiful writing. well life is incomplete without sorrow and happiness wont taste sweet without it but i agree with what you said too :)

very nicely written :)

The darkness increases everyday
and the web weaves around her dreams
stopping her dreams that give her strength
and all the light is engulfed by darkness
but just a small hope that tingles
and keeps her strength from fading away
the dreams that she has light hr path
and cover the darkness in her life
and the light of life flows into her life
she keeps fighting for life
the hope is still alive
while the web weaves a darkness everyday


how is it just wrote what came to mind i hope it is good but i knw its not as good as your poem :)

ill give it a try tomorrow need to find a subject to write on thanks i really appreciate all your views :)

No need to mourn for anything life is short to waste it by mourning just take life as a day to live and live life to the fullest be happy keep smiling and do what makes you happy :)

Happy Happy Birthday :)

ill give it a try but u are an amazing writer :)

not as good as u my friend i get inspired from your writings

your fragrance is still in the breeze
and my emotions freeze
still remember holding ur hand
and watching a live band
miss those days a lot and
your sweet goodnight kiss

hows it can u add them to ur poem my friend after making changes though dont knw if its good enough or not

that is what is nice about u i hope thereare more women like u in the world because from what ive seen with my friends is that most women have used them then after use dumped them like crap . I really hope there are more women with wit and brains and admirable qualities that u have

its a common method or way used by women to get a man do her work.its the same all over the world except a few and i knw most women do this but wont own up doing it . well u are an exception here and when a woman seeks advice for something the man has to do it to help her its common bcoz if he does nt he gets blamed that he doesnt care or love her TRUTH HURTS BUT IT CANT BE CHANGES

really really inspiring nice one my friend :)

hii and welcome here keep posting in forums as its the best place to meet interesting people :)

lol i dont drink but yeah it shouldbe shaken notstirred ( names's Bond, James Bond) hahaha lol :D

i totally agree with you Mr Totage

chicken definitely :)

hii Jeanna welcome here in the forums and yes you look sweet and cute