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The pillow echo's your presence
My arm touches where you lay I barely recall your kiss goodbye But your lips linger still |
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just enough to..tantalize......
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your fragrance is still in the breeze
and my emotions freeze still remember holding ur hand and watching a live band miss those days a lot and your sweet goodnight kiss hows it can u add them to ur poem my friend after making changes though dont knw if its good enough or not |
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just enough to..tantalize...... Isn't just enough |
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your fragrance is still in the breeze and my emotions freeze still remember holding ur hand and watching a live band miss those days a lot and your sweet goodnight kiss hows it can u add them to ur poem my friend after making changes though dont knw if its good enough or not Start posting, you read well my friend |
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not as good as u my friend i get inspired from your writings
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not as good as u my friend i get inspired from your writings So man. People here why shadow me, I find inspiration there too. You can write Try it, see what happens, great people here |
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ill give it a try but u are an amazing writer :)
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ill give it a try but u are an amazing writer :) Post and see what happens, these are good people |
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ill give it a try but u are an amazing writer :)
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not as good as u my friend i get inspired from your writings
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not as good as u my friend i get inspired from your writings
I agree with lady totally. |
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ill give it a try tomorrow need to find a subject to write on thanks i really appreciate all your views :)
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The pillow echo's your presence My arm touches where you lay I barely recall your kiss goodbye But your lips linger still
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The pillow echo's your presence My arm touches where you lay I barely recall your kiss goodbye But your lips linger still
Thanks 2kids, as always
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