Community > Posts By > neveragain
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Its not too chessy
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Dawn
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love it
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FOR ALL......
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Saying nothing is always the worst... drives me nuts
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Castle of the Freaks
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more people should read this
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What went wrong?
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anytime
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What went wrong?
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its lovely... you always make me cry
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Witness
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Sad and powerful. Great writing. ![]() yep |
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Castle of the Freaks
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oh someguy...I didn't realize...I've never seen you write...your wonderful! Your word tear at my heart... hey hey say away from my man.... just kidding, he is wonderful though ![]() |
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FOR ALL......
Edited by
neveragain
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Fri 11/30/07 04:52 AM
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why the heck do things double post
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LOL, I still think I'm nuts too, but the poem it still fine, everybody writes different, I just write several differnt ways, and in several different styles, ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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FOR ALL......
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Sorry, I meant rhythm, or pace, the rhyming is excellent. still think your nuts... pace is good to someguy |
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FOR ALL......
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This is great, but I could give you some advice to help keep the rythm a little better, if you like. are you kidding... the rythm is great |
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FOR ALL......
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love it as always
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Castle of the Freaks
Edited by
neveragain
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Thu 11/29/07 06:26 AM
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nevermind...
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Castle of the Freaks
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Castle of the Freaks
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Witness
Edited by
neveragain
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Tue 11/27/07 07:18 AM
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Well I think its wonderful
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Topic:
Witness
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reminds me of a trucker or a biker...
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