Topic: Dawn
someguy1313's photo
Wed 12/05/07 12:38 PM
A dawn I once knew, brilliant bright and full of life:
I only remember as a dream.
I knew my self well. A curse from hell:
I only follow among the tree’s and shadows of the night:
A sadness inside me, stabbed at my soul:
I wept out of control:
My eye’s so very sensitive, and skin so fair.
I was not strong ,nor rich with life:
I was doomed to live in the night.

My cry’s slowed at the sound of music:
I could see a ghostly reminder sitting alone playing
a somber song: hundreds of men began
dancing hand and hand: I to began to dance.
Spinning around faster and faster, Tell! A dead
calm. I quickly fell to my knees:
I felt alone and the sadness, cutting deep inside me:

I pleaded to the day ,,,
“Oh PLEASE ..LET ME SEE THE DAWN!
But without an answer ,I knew what I faced: I
felt disgraced: One only true fate I was shown
was my own. I was turned to a new life, and I was
to follow the music from miles away:

I am called by no-one.... For I knew nothing but fear & darkness
I pity nothing but my self. My only regret is the dawn I’d
never see again::

An Eternal Sadness:::::::::::::::::::

iceprincess's photo
Wed 12/05/07 12:44 PM
I like it

neveragain's photo
Wed 12/05/07 01:10 PM
love itflowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 12/05/07 01:13 PM
good oneflowerforyou

someguy1313's photo
Wed 12/05/07 01:25 PM
Thanks ladiesflowerforyou