Very nice!

I’ve heard our souls are accessed
through the windows of our eyes.
Did our souls just kiss?
Could that be why I am
feeling so overwhelmed?
Did our souls, constrained neither by time or space,
reach out and touch
each other, caress each other,
Embrace for a moment?
Such an electric feeling!
The eruption of emotion
unwarranted by foreknowledge
yet surely as strong
and sharp as a rapiers foil
carving your name into
the forefront of my mind.
We have just since met
and yet my desire for you
is akin to a small child’s
longing for sweets.
I yearn to press my lips to yours
knowing already your response.
Gleaned from the memory
of our soul’s first kiss.

Great message, very nice rhythm.

With the softness of a cloud
Your voice caresses my neck
Gently tickling the corners of my mouth into a smile
Anticipated touch as your lips
Breathe against my skin
My nape tingles with every syllable

The flesh of my skin
Raises to your touch
Remembrances of your magic fingers
Awakened sensations flood near overload
I awake from the dream
I cry, I miss you

thanks

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you all are very nice

I'm OK now.

Like twisted shards of metal
your words tear me asunder
with ease slicing to the quick.

You smile of pure innocence
revealing no guile,
sinless, I place no blame.

Your mind long since forsaken you
remembering no more
love, pain, joy of yesteryears.

Memories of your worth
are resurrected by your likeness,
though you’ve been gone for a while.

The echoes of my empty heart
Drown the words of your lips
Your affirmations of devotion
Are empty shells
Of another's broken promises

The fault not yours tho'
Still the pained jagged
Scars of recent memory
Seem to disqualify me
From true love’s hugs and kisses

awesome

Thank you

Unfettered love at long last.
Given, returned joyfully.
Two hearts melt,
Becoming a solitary,
Single-minded entity
Devoted to eternity.
Complete entanglement,
Our souls individualities dim,
Blending to one purpose..

Eternal bliss

Your pain is my torture,
Your smile a beacon of light.
Knowledge of complete joy
Stamped upon my entire being.
The radiance of our love
Should light the whole world.

And it does.

What a description of yearning for one of life's most sought after destinations. A reporter once asked Samuel Clemens (Mark Twain) what he thought the most beautiful word in the English language was and replied with a single word: Home. Loved it. Thanks

I love that. I dislike poetry that uses obscure words simply to use the words themselves. Your poem told a story, drew a picture.
Wonderful.

It seems that you’ve reached places
I’ve tried to keep from you.
Somehow the watchful guards I placed
Have failed in what they do.

Created from historical pain
And reinforced with scars
I thought their efforts
Had gone well so far.

Yet somehow you snuck by them
Did you lull them ‘sleep?
Did you sing like an angel
Causing them to weep?

‘Till they bowed down before you
And let you easily pass
Into the opening of my heart
Defenseless now at last

You wandered into passages
A labyrinth from the start
Now inextricably you’ve
Become tangled in my heart.

Different, I suppose it would be compared with "Theres the door, you may leave."

That was fantastic! I openly guffawed!

Animalistic desires conquer sensible trust

Sight, smells and sounds of uncontrollable lust

Pheromones free flowing the dancing begins

Anticipated friction of skin against skin

Crescendo builds to a feverish pitch

While parts of the body spasmodically twitch

Both people win at this marvelous game

Then comes the question “Hey, what’s your name?”

I enjoyed that very much!