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Sat 01/19/19 04:03 PM

WAH


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Sat 01/19/19 03:21 PM

I enjoy reading your poems, Neelamz. Thanks for sharing.


Thank you for your lovely comments smile2

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Sat 01/19/19 02:47 PM
Edited by Jasmine on Sat 01/19/19 02:47 PM

Teri Tasveer

Kab tak yuni din raat hum,
Teri tasveero se mann ko behelaaye,
Kaash Khuda ki nazar pare hum pe,
Aur yeh paagalpan uttar jaaye,
Koi aisa karishma ho,
Hum tere saath teri tasveer mei samaa jaaye,
Yah phir tu khud,
Tarveer se nikal kar,
Humaare saamne aa jaaye..


Translation:

Your Photo

How long am I supposed to,
Look at your photos and feel happy,
Night and day,
Wish god notices my plight,
And makes this madness go away,

Hoping some miracle happens,
And I join you in your photo,
So together we can be,
Or you instead,
Can come out of your photo and,
Appear in front of me..

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Sat 01/19/19 02:39 PM

How many atoms in a grain of sand?


I am busy building sand castles atm but let us know the answer once you finish counting :-)

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Fri 01/18/19 11:35 PM

on a random rant the other night, I thought of my ex-husband and MISSED him. So I looked him up on facebook. Geez, Thank God for random thoughts. you can tell by looking he's totally alcoholic, and he has 200 friends. Only 2 of them are NOT bikini clad teeny boppers... and those two are his family. SO......

I realize the past IS past
Somehow it seemed to go so fast
I always hoped that it would last
But now I'm grateful that it's passed.


hmmmm what a great poem.


Lol thank you for sharing.. Yes sometimes random thoughts do end up providing more insight smile2

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Thu 01/17/19 04:03 AM


Have you visited the zoo lately? Maybe that one of a kind guy is in there now. laugh
Thank you for sharing, Neelamz happy waving


Heheheheheheh that's funny I must say. waving


Yup it is :slight_smile:
@mzrosie :slight_smile:

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Thu 01/17/19 02:11 AM

Thanks Neelamz for sharing your random thoughts flowerforyou

I believe when we can look back and smile or laugh then we are truly free of the past.

I remember times when I was going through something how it felt like the end of the world, but years later I was able to laugh about it. Other times when looking back strong emotions would continue to resurface, as if I were living through it all over again. That was clearly a sign that I did not move past it and needed to heal some more.

It's a wonderful feeling when you can smile and find humor in our journey through life.

Thanks again! smile2


You are welcome smile2

And you are right. We need to smile and find humor in life. Life is already quite difficult and sad. Its important to see fun and light side of things in situations where and when possible. smile2

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Wed 01/16/19 06:51 PM

Hi Neelamz,
I understood what you were saying,
and i began to know more as it made me think on and off (for two days):
how difficult it is for guys in their teens and twenties
to break out of self love and expand to loving another.

What has changed after decades? I asked. Nothing much except sugar-coating'
As you know most blokes are poor in poetry. What they say and mean are different things. At best after sugar coating it would amount to this:

You are Beautiful,
You are kind,
You are also lucky, you know
to get me!
--xx--

Hello! what lemonade is this? Shucks.

--xx--
But as I said, your write up made me think for a day or two and by chance, I listened to W. D. Ehrhart on Youtube talking about his Vietnam days. He says he was 19 when he left for Vietnam and left behind his girl. Her picture kept him going, became an icon in his mind. So when he returned it was important for him to trace her (rest of story i don't know, it may be in his book)

which brings me to my random thought:
I see a picture by random in Mingle or by Google
In this case was moved by J Riorden's smile
found, she had died,

what is this, this law of attraction, this foolishness
the girl has moved on
the ache does not leave, so easily
as you may have guessed,
Riorden's smile reminded me of someone else

--xx--

So while a few members may strongly advise, 'stay away from him'
I have some reservations. Give the bloke a second chance
for being honest;
difficult to get along but the day he submits he loves you
you can be sure. right?
--xx--

If i write more, Rosie will definitely throw me out.
:smile:




This conversation happened 20 years ago lol..It just came in my mind so thot to share..Well I donno how I actually felt when this conversation actually happened but now I just find it funny smile2

Just like last year I had a really big bad fight with someone from NZ. At that time, I felt quite upset and hurt. But now each time I think of that fight, it brings a smile to my face coz it was funny in a way and I guess real emotions came out for both people.

I guess some incidents in life stand out smile2

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Wed 01/16/19 12:26 PM



Me: Then you should be kept in a zoo for your safety or else you will become extinct!

Ouch, sounds like my mother.


I looked for Holly Riordan
and Google showed me Jennifer Riordan's picture
she died ..,


Shucks



Well that ex was like a spoiled kid lol

Holly is still alive with her last post 6hrs ago.

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Tue 01/15/19 02:36 AM



Me: Then you should be kept in a zoo for your safety or else you will become extinct!

Hahahahahaha……..
Good one!


Lol..Sometimes real life incidents can turn out to be funnysmile2


Safety is priority.



Lol it is.

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Mon 01/14/19 08:23 PM

Me: Then you should be kept in a zoo for your safety or else you will become extinct!

Hahahahahaha……..
Good one!


Lol..Sometimes real life incidents can turn out to be funnysmile2

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Mon 01/14/19 03:14 PM


2 actually.

First a conversation I had with a guy long time ago..donno why it came back today..

Guy: You know Iam one of a kind. There is no one like me. You should feel lucky I am with you.

Me: So you are one of a kind. A rare species?

Guy: Yes, that's me.

Me: Then you should be kept in a zoo for your safety or else you will become extinct!

Well I guess his sense of humor wasn't as big as his ego..Never heard from him again..Lol



lol thanks for the laugh : )


lol smile2

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Mon 01/14/19 03:13 PM

Don't get too close, he may fling something at you!


Hehe true highly likely lol

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Mon 01/14/19 12:47 PM

Have you visited the zoo lately? Maybe that one of a kind guy is in there now. laugh
Thank you for sharing, Neelamz happy waving


Hehe maybe I should pay him a visit :smile:

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Mon 01/14/19 12:27 PM
2 actually.

First a conversation I had with a guy long time ago..donno why it came back today..

Guy: You know Iam one of a kind. There is no one like me. You should feel lucky I am with you.

Me: So you are one of a kind. A rare species?

Guy: Yes, that's me.

Me: Then you should be kept in a zoo for your safety or else you will become extinct!

Well I guess his sense of humor wasn't as big as his ego..Never heard from him again..Lol


Second, I just thought to acknowledge this writer Holly Riordan..this girl creates magic with her words..I read a piece she wrote online about her crush. I don't know if it was work of fiction or reality based. But it had a great impact on me as I was having similar thoughts about my crush at that time. It seemed like she gave words to my thoughts. Anyways her written piece inspired me to write most of my poems which I posted here.




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Fri 01/11/19 11:50 PM
Sweetest tender touch - Maxi Priest

(Amazing voice...amazing lyrics)

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Fri 01/11/19 02:12 AM
Try me by Jason n Jennifer

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Thu 01/10/19 07:46 PM
With chewy turkey
December is over now
Why is waiting still

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Wed 01/02/19 02:11 AM
You're still the one by Shania Twain

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Sun 12/30/18 04:19 PM
Another year has come to an end,
Another look at where we stand,
With hope and joy and a little fear,
Looking forward to new year..