Hi again, this syndrome I have effects my fine and gross motor skills and is to do with the small top bit of my chromsone no 18
missing this is the reason why I am slow.

This can also included very serious apperance defects as follows
cleft pelet, stunted growth, disforities in ears, had and feet, no hair. It also effect spacial awarness and effects developement
for diagrame please look name of syndrome in you search engine.

Or look at the link below

http://www.chromosome18.org/TheConditions/18p/tabid/126/Default.aspx

Only a hundred cases have this and I am one of the lucky ones.

Check out the pictures and you'll see why. I am a girl who certain stand out.

Confident

My most anoying question is when I'm about to take my dog for a walk.
my mother turns to me and say

" Haven't you gone yet?"


Okay I'm slow I get it but that's me and not my fault.
it my 18 p minus.

Here one I just got

Pity the world not me.
For it them not seen.
My heart bleads.

But I can not cry no longer.
my hearts sad.
but no tears.

I watch the world
cease to be..
by their own doing.
I see.

....

Don't pity me.
I tell them
" Stop it."
but they can't
hear me.

I'm just the wind.
or they so see.
my hearts heavy
but I can cry no longer

Oh world what have you done.
the beating of the battle drum
I've sent signs of warings
down through some.

Now soon the time will come
when you know your fate.
but my friend.

It's too late.


Pity world not me..

pity...the..world ...not ..me


....

Oh dear looks like he is upset but unable to cry anymore poor soul

Hmmm... I heard this is my head last night

Crashing thunder,
Glinting rain and darkness of the night.
Oh why dose the world have to fight.

Damn it I thought I got it right!
Maybe it is time to end the days.
Flood the world again..
Hmmm...I do wonder if that will work?

The angles are refusing to play.
Oh please, the fightings hurting me.
I just want a world that doesn't make
me sigh as I watch my men die.

Oh dear, I think I have something in my eye....


....Hmmm looks like he is seriously upset..
I see what I get to night.

'as soft as the wind' it should be.

His answer a soft as the wind.
Loud as the ocean.
Clear as the springs
warm as the sun.

God smiles down upon the small worlds he has created
and made.
" No everybody believe in me.."
He doesn't say he just smiles and laughs.
" What a pleasent day."
He tell them. A rainbow appears leading the way!

Hope is a special feeling and it is nice to know hope
is a around the corner.

' I have notice 'it dimay' should be 'in dismay'
Hope his helps

Wow what a great poem! so emotion you empathise with the character's
feels and show sadness in the most elgant way.

Moving and touching poems if written wright can make you or ( Cry)
Here's mine



Through a Police Officer's Eyes


One the cold marble floor; footsteps rang out, once more..
a knock on the door...
Silence..
Only a lady as white as the floor..
Lying frozen as crystal ice...
Her hand out stretched for the door..
But her life gone, her colour no more.
. . .

In the station the phone does ring..
Grim faces are all in
a crime has been done..
No time for fun

Crime doesn't rest..
but show policemen at their best!!
When they get their man
Under arrest....
You could say it is a pest!

On the marble floor a cluster of echo's
rings once more...
To the body with care
The hand out stretched: still searching for an
answer..
which was not there.

Mysteries arrive
and questions with no answers three
How, Why and Who?
Staring at the body why the answer
Right there under her hair...

A Nasty person have we..
Bruises I see three..
one on her neck...
and two on her knee...

Hmm the motive is clear to me
check her purse, Has the money gone?
No... then I'm wrong..
It is Murder I do see...

Could it be the maid, the butler or the cook...
Or a stranger that was outside hiding in a nook?
Or her husband dear...
startle her like a wild deer..





But what was the motive now.?
We've got the how...
Who's the real swine..
Will they give me my line...?
Or is the end of our time..?

All I know is all I see..
It could be one of the three..
for on that marble floor...
There she lies
Crystal as ice...

I turn away shaking my head it dismay..
How can they do it...?
By using a thrust of a knife..
They take a person life..!.

Life is unfair that is the world about..
but do see good news..
No it is all sad...
I sigh it is really that bad?

So my friends
Don't carry a knife..
Or you could end up
in one of our cars

Or Behind bars..
so don't judge my work clothes
or badge you see..

Just judge me by my personality...
I don't like it when a force gets slogged
and I get figures held up to me
We all make mistakes you see..

That how a human can be
so a poems is here
through eyes of our police personal
Will thing improve?
Only they can tell me..

Through the critical eye of the Telly
So next time you here the sirens loud..
Move over and make Britain proud!
To once again be crime free..

Who can do it?
You and me...
That is who..
It is true!

So move over!
When the sirens flash
blue!
For us police.
Have a Job to do
Too!

We could be rushing fast.
To a person at their last gasp.
Under the tape.
Whether it be white or blue.
Or yellow too.
Or we could be after you.

So don't panic
and do a run.
Because you'll be in more trouble
when we are done.
For Law were the number 1

So think
do you need that drink?

Do you drive?
Do you want to crash in a car
and be trapped in side?

If the answer No
then pull over if you please.
To the side of the road.
But don't make it a squeeze
because there is others too

Trying to get through.

But if the answer Yes...
Uh, oh we'll hunt you down.
After we've dealt with you.
Ram a police car..
and Seriously you will end up behind bars.

Then I'll get to say my line..
as our team book you in for
Jail time!





Oh yes what this I see an identity?
…..Oh right I see the dental records.
Nice, Oh nice
We'll get them now

They have made a fatal flaw.
They left a finger print on the door..
and a small bit of blood on the floor.
Oh yes what fun,

We get them for sure!


There's my phone my kids are home,
but it is not...
Oh look a thing which they have forgot.
Hah it is a wedge of cash..
but just how much is here..
I think we have a drug dealer..
Oh ..my what a lot of dosh.

I think I have and idea who it is..
Our old mate Josh.
Into his home..
Oh he is on the run.
Hah, in a crash here we came..
Oh yes …...Oh no
He is gone...
There goes my phone..
….....I don't believe it
No I don't
this has got to be Joke.
He has been caught
and book in for time.

And I didn't get my line.

I tell you now fighting crime
takes up the time..
and it's no joke.
When we have to deal
with a drunken woman or bloke!

Ah here we go...
another thing..
as the station phone does ring

Oh come on now
let us go past!

Thanks everyone and my dogs name is 'Flynn' it goes with bin.
King. Get my drift...

Ha great to say more time and more people time.

' Plenty of Fish in the sea'

It's a new DVD avaible at the link below plays as Game on
PC and Nitendo Ds. It is based on the book by Sir Arthur.coyan Dolye.
Just look at the image on the front.

http://www.overstock.com/Books-Movies-Music-Games/PC-Sherlock-Holmes-The-Awakened-DVD-ROM/3075856/product.html?cid=133635

It is in 3D!

The Awakened!

Indeed Hercule hates being called 'French' and he appears to be
the class act it seames to be a habbit of this when he is upset he will puff out his cheeks and turn away or look after them.
He'll only shout when he knows they are lying.

You could say he is a bit Over the top.

" Madomsell alow me to introduce myself I am Hercult Poirot!"

Jimmy stared at the televison in horror, he had dropped the paper he had been reading just before and he hit the table.

On the edge of his seat now he watched the screen any sign of brother, he was hopping he was still alive..

Nothing, just the usual things; His day carried on as normal his lunch wss bought and he sat in his little house enjoying a hopefully quiet evening in.

Then a knock came on the door and two soliders stood there looking very solem indeed.
" Jimmy Jasson"
Jimmy nodded the second man haded him something it was his brother's
tag.
" He was a hero." The first solider said his voice wavering slightly..
" He saved us all...he picked up a live shell and chucked it back towards the others..."
Silence...
" The next was a bright light it had exploded in his hand.."

There was silence Jimmy stared at the tag in horror, his eyes welled up and he let out of scream of sadness.
He fell to the floor..
" Jake was my brother and my best friend.. he was my twin..I begged him not too..I didn't want to face life without him..."
The two solider's left leavng jimmy to face life alone.
. . .

Later on a frantic 999/911 call came in Jimmy had gone and was missing his brother's tag..No one knew or heard anything until
a body was washed up in it's hands it graps the tag with Jake
on it..this was confirmed by card as Jimmy.
He was with his brother now...
...............................

I must first say sorry for the sad story. However, I'm
doing this as a point to say the news is full of blues at the
moment and I hope London 2012 comes soon so we can have some good news.

Like loads of gold medals!

I'm going to write down my thoughts on everything in this way so
look out for more snipits and please add you own.

Hello I have the above syndrome and I was wondering what is
the reason I can't find a site or person that is right?

Info....

18 P minus syndrome is as below



http://www.wrongdiagnosis.com/symbol/18p_minus_syndrome/intro.htm#whatis

Please copy and paste the like only a litte bit at the top of my Chromosome 18 is missing it looks like a pear with the small top cut of this makes me slower than most people at everything.

Thanks.

God I know that's you.

The gates of heaven are there for me and you.
The warmth I feel is true..
God I know that's you.
Golden like the sun.
like a fresh breath upon.

Giving hope and life.
Love care.
Hoping for a world.
Without despear.

God I know you are there.
Help me please.
Make the world..see.
There is truth in you.

I have seen,
I have seen.

The happiness you do bring.
When people ask you ..
to come right in.
They dance and sing.

Let Jesus in.
Let him in.
Let him in.

The gates of heaven are there for me and you.
The warmth I feel is true...
God I know that's you.
Golden like the sun.
like a fresh breath upon.

Giving hope and life.
Love care.
Hoping for a word.
Without despear.

God I know that's you.
Jesus I know you came.
To sort out the world from pain.
To heal and save the word.
It's such a shame.



That many lives.
Have hopelessly been slain.
Causing grief and tears.
I know you both can hear.

Help me sort the world's sorrow
away. Giving them hope and life.
Love and care.
God, father, I know your there.

I have seen.
I have seen

The happiness you can bring.
Make the whole world dance.
Make the whole world sing.
Giving them peace and hope.
Giving them happiness.

I have seen
I have seen

The happiness you do bring.
When people ask you to..
Come right in.
They dance and sing.

Let him in
Let him in.
Let Jesus in.

God I know that's you.
The warmth I feel is true..
God I know that's you.

From heaven.
That is you...
That is you.

God I know that's you.
The warmth I feel is true.
That is you.
That is you.

Gates of heaven,
Gates of heaven.
Golden like the sun.
like a fresh breath upon.

Giving hope and life.
Love and care.
Hoping for a world.
Without despear.

God I know that's you.
Come into me.
Make me sing and dace
too.

God I know that's you.

God I know that's you.

That is you.

God I know that is you

Thank you!

'Mincing'

Any one seen the litte smart detective produce by 'Agatha Christie'?


.....................Did you Know?

Fact he appeared on an early 'Sherlock Holmes' Movie where he was driving the cart and 'watson' told him to use his 'little grey cells'

There's Brian and Stewie too.. Don't they have some wacky events?

Louis has red hair and I like that....

Hmmm then there's Chris, Meg.

Thanks everyone!

Endangered


Some people think it's fun
to shoot an animal.
With a gun!
What monsters they have become!

Elephants for their tusk.
Rhino's for their horn...
Leopards and Cheaters for their fur..
White lions too.

It is sad, but is true.
If you leave them alone.
They wont hurt you.

They are a part of this world too.

Crapped in a tiny cage
Chimpanzees are sold on the market.
In an illegal trade.
Down comes the trees.

It is sad to see...
I would rather watch them free..
But when the time will come.
When all the animals will have disappeared.

When things do get that bad
and I hope they don't
but if they do.

Who's fault is it,
It's not the chimpanzees, leopard, cheater, white, lion's, orangutans, woolly monkey or grizzle bears.
No it's not there's

Who's the ones that cut down there habitat?
Who's the ones that caused the food to go?
Who's the ones that doesn't care?.
Down comes the trees.
More fields please...
as sad sight to see,

It not the turtles, tortoises too
It not and the monkeys. Leopard, white rhino, elephants and chimpanzees.
So who's this beast, this monster? they cry.
Well the answer is sad...
It is you!
It is true!


The animals need the help
who can help them?

Well that's easy
The answer for their lives is....
You and me!
The polar bears fight.
For survival on the arctic winter's ice.
But slowly surely it is melting..
Ice thinning!
No fine restaurant for them to dine in.

Hunting on the ice,
Falling in water.. freezing cold.
Frozen sea no longer hold.
Hardly will we see a white bear..
but even they need love and care.

But Who can help them?

That easy,
Us humans
You and me!

For if we don't young children in the future may never see the magical
polar bear it will just be gone.
And rare!

Who's fault will that be?
Humans
Like you and me!

Enjoy reading this poem