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trublu5ft2
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awesome T.
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awesome!!
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Topic:
the show
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ive been a thin
ive been a free this jig really big but a star too far wanna go slow er and deep er love is what it isnt dont wont know fuuck the show |
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Topic:
birds
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a lark
on pineapple lemon love bluebirds dented beak hangs on groovy leaves a ton of feathers infinite wings |
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Christmas Legend
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nice
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Lisa and Dali and Me
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KC this is most awesome
this is brilliant this is great this is awesome oops said that already |
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Topic:
narvar
Edited by
jimz
on
Sat 12/12/09 05:29 PM
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Brilllll,,,,bril,,,,,liant,,,brilliantimostso,,,,,, so are you master rhymer |
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Topic:
a longing
Edited by
jimz
on
Sat 12/12/09 05:35 PM
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sound of rushing wind
feel of rushing water my heart wishes for the rushing wind my world would feel a cool rushing the bounty of devotion flowers that would grow while i would pray for the tree |
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Topic:
narvar
Edited by
jimz
on
Sat 12/12/09 04:46 PM
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nava vava boom
niva vive leana fiers wert narvar tern nevear reeeel on un der whiilst iiii |
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Topic:
whip
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Whip it. Whip it good! |
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Topic:
whip
Edited by
jimz
on
Sat 12/12/09 01:00 PM
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taking the whip
the talking whip red white and blue reason absolute when the patriots dismount take whip in tongue slice into red white and blue red white i gave blue into ribbon old lady sews into my ribs whip so long it will not half me in too into ribbon around mane burned |
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Topic:
The Darkness
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liked this one too
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Topic:
Bittersweet Dreams
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nice
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Topic:
house of burning
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between shade
irony cannot find me no image in bind canary head back young dove again in love were in im in fast this castle revolving love fast but were just trying to catch up |
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Watery harmony
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wow, this my favorite of yours of the few I read
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~ ready set go
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nicely done, really enjoyed
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Topic:
new
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new moon
in my breakfast cereal sugar clouds in milky sea oh new dawn i am dew i am grass i am man who cuts grass new day i am sun i am moving soul i am moonshine i am ectasy new night day in dream velvet sea new sea always new |
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Topic:
again
Edited by
jimz
on
Thu 12/10/09 02:24 PM
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one two three
four five six seven eight nine ten i am zen one two three four five six seven eight nine ten i begin one two three four five six seven eight nine ten the end one two three four five six seven eight nine ten i am zen |
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Topic:
Real
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REAL I felt you in my hands a woman Real Brash sassy and Real able from mind to soul Perfectly black Colored Coal and Real awesome! |
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Topic:
Pipe Dreams
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hey, hi, what's up, book, book, sounds exciting
nice poem |
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