that's great. shows you, and your interests!

If I'm going to dish it out, I better be able to take it, yes?

DOESN'T

Do you want you profile to be rated? or do you want all women in your area to respond to your profile?

Well, since you posted in 'rate your profile', i am going to rate it.

When you put one on, that is.

You don't have a profile. Are you looking for women to see your photo, and think, 'wow, he is a great guy who is hot- i want to date him!'

Sir, that is not going to happen. Complete your profile, then maybe women in your area will respond to your ad.

Good luck!

YOU SAID- I'm also very emotional, so don't contact me if you are only going to let me down when you've had enough. It's happened to me too often before.

Don't make yourself sound too needy or high maintenance in
and emotional sense.

YOU SAID-I'm NOT INTO HEADGAMES!!!

Some may say this line is ok, but my question is 'is
anyone into headgames?' i would think that is a given, and
really not necessary, but ok.

YOU SAID- I get lonely and depressed when I haven't got anyone to talk to. So come on, What do you have to lose?

These 2 line are bad. bad, bad, bad. You can't remove them
fast enough.

Now I know, we have all been hurt, and want to protect ourselves from it happening again. But too much info is just bad. It is good for the reader- cause they know to just keep on moving. but bad for you- cause they just keep on moving.

I think i can say this safely for MOST women- not ALL. We don't want a guy that is more emotional than us. Even if we want a sensitive guy- we still want him to be a MAN in our eyes.

Not that you aren't, but your profile kind of makes you sound sad, beaten down, and like no one wants you. We want someone that is likeable and attractive- in general- and to others.

So be honest, but don't make yourself sound not wanted. Take those 3 lines out, and you have yourself a pretty good profile:)

I am just trying to help- not trying to sound mean. I hope i don't take a beating for this one- cause no one else has given any real feedback.

OK. you have 6 pictures of the exact same shot- you straight on looking very unhappy. But your profile says you like to laugh. Seriously, you should take down 5 of the photo of you, and add one of you smiling, and one of you doing something. surely you can find a photo of you doing the dishes, or playing with your son, or something. Oh, and i think you should add some more interests. do you like hanging out with friends, family, playing cards, gambling, drinking like a fish (ok, hopefully none of the latter, but you get the idea).

Good luck!

Your photos and brief description are good. You come across as a fun guy who has friends and likes children (which is good). You don't say anything about what you are looking for though, so i think you should add something about that. So it looks like you have some standards in who you will date.

There you go!

OOOh. Got me on that one. SO my example is no good in THIS case. Besides i said 'some'- not 'all'. obviously, you are not one of the clueless. And i meant that in the most loving way.

Do you want some constructive criticism? Cause i have a thought.

Ok. perfect example of how clueless some men can be. When you see more than one person in a photo, you can usually look at the other photos to see who the 'star' of the photo is. It is a truly lazy man that can't take time to look at your other 2 photos and determine which is you. Oh, or maybe that one just has bad vision.
Your photos are good! your profile could maybe use a little more, but it isn't bad- and i would bet you are getting plenty of emails though.

Well obviously you aren't really listening, because your ad still says 'ladies man' in your heading; but your photo says 'dumb-founded'. I am not trying to be mean either. You have GOT to change those 2 things if you want to meet anyone worth meeting. seriously.
Your ad starts off with a lie right from the start. Cause I'm thinking if your were truly a 'ladies man', you wouldn't have time to be searching online for a woman- too many would be beating down your door! I will keep an eye out for the profile changes:)

Your profile says 'nice guy looking for nice gal'. Your photo says 'Playa'- and not sax player either. I am sure that photo would be good for other purposes, but this site is not one of them. You can't get that photo off your profile fast enough.
Your responses say you are a nice guy too. so good luck:)

HA HA. This makes for good reading.
Seriously though- you are a good looking kid, fella, man- whatever you prefer. I think you should get rid of the boxing w/ beers photo. It does you no justice.

For Robert1652- I think you're profile and pics are good. i bet they are a good description of your personality :) I think that is what our profiles should be- a good description of ourselves and our personalities!

You're a good kisser?? Have you kissed yourself? My thought is that you should never trust someone that says, 'trust me'. And your profile is too long and too philosophical for this purpose.
And no, i am not angry. I would just think that if you were so nice to offer up your advice to us ladies, that you may be open to some constructive criticism yourself.
Good luck:)

your photos show personality. your profile write up is borderline too long. but just borderline. i think women in general will take time to read. I believe it is men in general that don't like the read a woman's profile that is too long. Your good i think.

Me Personally- Your profile needs to be half as long. seriously. although it provides a lot of info, women are either not going to read it, or they are going to say you are overly chatty, or too much something. would you REALLY read a woman's profile that is that long. the pics are great. i think you should make the viking photo your main! i think it would have that 'make ya look' effect.

maybe you shouldn't post a photo w/ beer in both shots. just a thought.