Topic: Ok then
doesnt_play_well's photo
Thu 03/27/08 06:53 PM
Since I got bashed for writting wuotes then ill put in some of my songs and see what you all think.



My courage starts to fade:

Waitin' on my porch again
for the nightly argument
and now that it has come and went
I have to let this anger vent
now
holding onto catastrophy
hoping to be the nominee
the next one who is forced to leave
and wave goodbye to my family

Chorus:

Waiting for the day
that my dreams are pushed away
and im left in dissmay
as my courage starts to fade

Verse 2:

Yeah im not gonna be the one
the one who ruins all the fun
and i refuse to overrun
anything ir anyone
yeah
now im just gonna make-believe
and never let my spiri grieve
the soul i lose when im decieved
and nothingness i will achieve

chorus:



Copyright Shiann Bay

pkh's photo
Thu 03/27/08 07:02 PM
very nice don't ever make believe be true to your heart.This migh get moved because there is a forum to post music

doesnt_play_well's photo
Thu 03/27/08 07:15 PM
its ok if its moved.....and thank you

pkh's photo
Thu 03/27/08 07:23 PM
your quite welcome

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 03/27/08 08:15 PM
That is wonderful!!! Have you got it put to music yet? I would love to hear it if there is a way...flowerforyou

doesnt_play_well's photo
Thu 03/27/08 09:24 PM

That is wonderful!!! Have you got it put to music yet? I would love to hear it if there is a way...flowerforyou


When I get my keyboard im gonna edit my electric guitar and keyboard together and sing to it.....so it shoulf be cool.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 03/28/08 07:07 AM
happy drinker flowerforyou