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Topic: " I lost you", very short
lookforyou Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 67	Fri 12/29/06 05:49 PM
So soft the brief touch of your lips on my cheek. Was I almost intruding? "Look after yourself " should have been "I love you!" Then the Jumbo flew over my head and I shouted my love above the roar and thundering thrust . . . as if you'd hear. Through the clouds in my eyes I watched you fly away and wished I'd been born with wings. P. Christopher Until...

songbirrd Joined Sat 12/23/06 Posts: 3743	Fri 12/29/06 05:50 PM
that's really good

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Fri 12/29/06 05:50 PM
That's Awesome Chris keep up the good work :)

MikeM68 Joined Wed 07/26/06 Posts: 2638	Fri 12/29/06 05:57 PM
yep not bad i guess but why not put it in poems thread? is everyone too lazy to scroll down or what?

tadpoleo8 Joined Tue 12/26/06 Posts: 353	Fri 12/29/06 06:17 PM
old mother hubbard got in her cubbord to get her dog a done when she bent over rover took over and she got a bone of her own is that cool... do i fit in around here

songbirrd Joined Sat 12/23/06 Posts: 3743	Fri 12/29/06 06:19 PM
LOL dirrty minded tadpole,very funny though

MikeM68 Joined Wed 07/26/06 Posts: 2638	Fri 12/29/06 06:21 PM
andrew dice clay is funny sob

lookforyou Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 67	Fri 12/29/06 06:24 PM
it has to do with relationships, if you really read it. Sorry, if I offend some people, by my writings. I just write, hoping someone uses my words to keep hold of someone else, so that they dont end up on this site, looking for "completeness". P. Christopher Until...

ltazberg Joined Thu 12/28/06 Posts: 7	Fri 12/29/06 06:32 PM
i thought it was there is nothing offencive about it. keep it up very good

Cybear Joined Sun 11/19/06 Posts: 899	Sat 12/30/06 10:43 AM
What's up Chris?Very nice to meet you.I understood it very well and I deeply appreciate the message you're putting out there.Keep up the good bro.Also remember to ignore any negativity rolling of the tongues of trolls.They ain't worth the same oxygen that we breathe.Nice work and stay at it.Godspeed!Cybear.

sugargirl Joined Wed 09/13/06 Posts: 199	Sat 12/30/06 03:45 PM
Good job Chris! Keep um' coming!

ontario505 Joined Sat 12/30/06 Posts: 64	Sat 12/30/06 03:49 PM
Hey Chris, go to the poems section you Knucklehead, and post your poems....oh that first one was way sappy.....it would make chicks puke violently....!

Dreamweaverangel Joined Thu 11/30/06 Posts: 823	Sat 12/30/06 04:13 PM
Lookforyou....That was very very beautiful! I hope you find who you are looking for! You write real good. Do not let anyone stop you from your writing or your search!

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