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Topic: Why Cant I be
someguy1313 Joined Wed 11/14/07 Posts: 754	Wed 03/05/08 04:25 AM
Why can't I be... The one you kiss? The one you hug? The one you miss? The one you touch? The one you call? When you have troubles Big or small.... Why can't I be... The one you adore? Who captures your heart And so much more? Why can't I be... The one you please? The one you massage? The only one you need? Why can't I be... I ask you why? The thought of this Just makes me wish & cry... An Eternal Sadness:::

boneyjoe Joined Sun 12/09/07 Posts: 6196	Wed 03/05/08 04:26 AM
cause u ant to one for her

Gypsy41 Joined Tue 05/15/07 Posts: 123359	Wed 03/05/08 04:31 AM
You can for that one.......you will find her!!

dhutch9 Joined Fri 06/15/07 Posts: 604	Wed 03/05/08 04:32 AM
That was nice. I think we've all felt that way.

Sexyklp4U Joined Mon 11/26/07 Posts: 3377	Wed 03/05/08 04:37 AM
Why can't I be... The one you kiss? The one you hug? The one you miss? The one you touch? The one you call? When you have troubles Big or small.... Why can't I be... The one you adore? Who captures your heart And so much more? Why can't I be... The one you please? The one you massage? The only one you need? Why can't I be... I ask you why? The thought of this Just makes me wish & cry... An Eternal Sadness::: stinks, doesnt it? you'll find her..gotta keep the faith

mjdiaz Joined Wed 03/05/08 Posts: 22	Wed 03/05/08 04:41 AM
patience is everything. He will reveal your 'the one' in His perfect time... feel better! :)

someguy1313 Joined Wed 11/14/07 Posts: 754	Wed 03/05/08 04:53 AM
Thank you everyone for the kind words.... I wrote that about 11 years ago though.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 03/05/08 08:35 AM


mjdiaz Joined Wed 03/05/08 Posts: 22	Mon 03/24/08 09:08 AM
11 years ago? wow, u must have moved on already :) time heals all wounds anyhow :).

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 03/24/08 09:09 AM
very nice I think we all long for that

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 03/24/08 09:12 AM
Hey Someguy, it took me 6 years to TRY and BE THAT person with a lady and then I realized I NEVER COULD BE. But NOW I look back and WISH I would have KNOWN that after only 6 months,lol,lol. But we ALL live and learn....I WON'T do that again...

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 03/24/08 09:16 AM
nice write! the right somebody the right time the right place there is one for all

someguy1313 Joined Wed 11/14/07 Posts: 754	Thu 03/27/08 12:33 PM
Thank you for all your kind words everyone

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