Topic: plz rate me honest and give pointers
DJINVA's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:22 PM
because i never get mail and i did meet one special girl off this site and the we just broke up and it didnt work that why my profile is new because when i met her i deleted it thinking i found the one but no true.she contacted me. all of the women i contact dont want to return my emails so please help me figure out why i cant meet people on here and why girls dont contact me ever.thanks

Pete026's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:25 PM
It's pretty good, dude! I've never seen that many interests on a profile!!

All I can suggest (and I'm sure others would agree) is to post more in the forums.

Good luck, bro! drinker

i_think_im_broken's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:27 PM
my first thought, stop whining about not getting emails and nobody talking to you. it makes you sound really desperate. most every guy on this site and probably a lot of the girls as well goes threw this exact same thing, it's not just you.

Fade2Black's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:28 PM
Well I agree with Pete.

Your interests provide something for everyone .. anyone ... you know. :tongue:

But either way, be safe soldier.

and ya, most guys on online sites complain about the lack of emails. Just goes with your territory laugh

erowid1's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:30 PM
it may be the camo,the guns and the fact that that you spelled boy....boi? just my opinion though! best of luck

DJINVA's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:31 PM
much thanks pete and you others ill keep those thoughts in mind:)

no photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:35 PM
I agree with what Pete had to say. The more you post the more friends you are sure to make.

EtherealEmbers's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:35 PM
A Few Tips:

**Try to be more positive. Take out all the complaints.

**Don't tell everyone your business or that you live with your parents. That can be something you talk about later.

**Don't type in ALL CAPS. No women like that. It seems like you're yelling.

**Put spaces in between your paragraphs so it's easier to read.

**Talk more about what type of girl you're looking for, and take out all the "I hate" stuff.

**Don't talk about women of the past.

DJINVA's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:38 PM
a womans honest opinion thanks above!

erowid1's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:39 PM

A Few Tips:

**Try to be more positive. Take out all the complaints.

**Don't tell everyone your business or that you live with your parents. That can be something you talk about later.

**Don't type in ALL CAPS. No women like that. It seems like you're yelling.

**Put spaces in between your paragraphs so it's easier to read.

**Talk more about what type of girl you're looking for, and take out all the "I hate" stuff.

**Don't talk about women of the past.
i think your gonna get an email embers!!:tongue:

EtherealEmbers's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:43 PM


A Few Tips:

**Try to be more positive. Take out all the complaints.

**Don't tell everyone your business or that you live with your parents. That can be something you talk about later.

**Don't type in ALL CAPS. No women like that. It seems like you're yelling.

**Put spaces in between your paragraphs so it's easier to read.

**Talk more about what type of girl you're looking for, and take out all the "I hate" stuff.

**Don't talk about women of the past.
i think your gonna get an email embers!!:tongue:


lol oh stop...
he was just showing appreciation... laugh

hellkitten54's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:44 PM
I didnt read it, cause I can't stand all caps.:tongue: But your a military dude, so I know there are a lot of young ladies out there that would love to bang ya. good luck!flowerforyou

erowid1's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:46 PM



A Few Tips:

**Try to be more positive. Take out all the complaints.

**Don't tell everyone your business or that you live with your parents. That can be something you talk about later.

**Don't type in ALL CAPS. No women like that. It seems like you're yelling.

**Put spaces in between your paragraphs so it's easier to read.

**Talk more about what type of girl you're looking for, and take out all the "I hate" stuff.

**Don't talk about women of the past.
i think your gonna get an email embers!!:tongue:


lol oh stop...
he was just showing appreciation... laugh
LOL!!! sorry!drinker

pjdh1952's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:49 PM
try using a little more punctuation!

lulapr's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:52 PM
a hint from an 'older' woman...don't talk about past relationships...they are past for a reason that can be talked about later if necessary...'

don't write in 'CAPS' it feels like u r yellling out requests, commands, etc...

you seem like a nice kid good luck on your searchflowerforyou

forever_fifites's photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:55 PM
Well, if I were a woman I'd want you to post a pic with a little more contrast in it. And post one that shows you just from the shoulders up, most everybody but the perverts zoom in on facial features first and that pic just doesn't show up.



because i never get mail and i did meet one special girl off this site and the we just broke up and it didnt work that why my profile is new because when i met her i deleted it thinking i found the one but no true.she contacted me. all of the women i contact dont want to return my emails so please help me figure out why i cant meet people on here and why girls dont contact me ever.thanks

no photo
Mon 03/03/08 12:58 PM
flowerforyou OK, I am a lot older than you so I will tell you what I think is happening here.First (please take this wrong) you act like your mad at the world.You can't write a profile with everything negative. Write what you like to do,dislikes ,foods,movies you like, favorite vacation place and maybe what you want in your special lady & what she will get in you. Maybe talk about old school times,what you did in the service & what you learn. You can't judge everyone the same & there maybe some that you won't want them to judge you wrong.You have to take as well as give. I'm sure you are very nice guy but you come off to hardcore.Are you looking for a sparing partner or a soul mate.You'll get there just need a little work.Don't listen to negative people who say "well I'll tell you if it were me" Those people love misery because their in the same boat. Good Luck!bigsmile

DJINVA's photo
Mon 03/03/08 01:02 PM
look thanks everyone i have edited my profile and the result is there. please tell me what u think of the changes!

EtherealEmbers's photo
Mon 03/03/08 01:16 PM
Ok, since you're asking for it...

You still need to space out the paragraphs... this is way too clumped together to read easily... and most people won't take the time to bother.

I'd also suggest copying and pasting your essay to Microsoft Word, because you have some serious spellcheck issues.

That's it... that's the last of the critique from me. Good luck:smile:

DJINVA's photo
Mon 03/03/08 01:21 PM
thanks
ill get to it later!