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Topic: short love
Waltercool Joined Mon 01/28/08 Posts: 784	Sun 03/02/08 07:48 PM
An angel has come to me. With love and open arms. Her beauty and grace, Can't be surpass can't you see. Her heart is clear. She has felln for a boy from the farms. With smile and rosey cheaks on her face. Her love is showwn without fear. This feeling is wonderful. But such is young love. Let us see where we go. Shall we go to heaven. With love, we are careful. As if flying like doves. Shall we tie that boe? We shall go to heaven. tell me what you think!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sun 03/02/08 07:52 PM
very sweet,and nothing wrong with a farm boy,hope to see more.

Waltercool Joined Mon 01/28/08 Posts: 784	Sun 03/02/08 07:55 PM
thanks but this farm boy is in okinawa! and can't be on his farm for a few more years!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sun 03/02/08 07:58 PM
well I wish you all the best and God Bless

Waltercool Joined Mon 01/28/08 Posts: 784	Sun 03/02/08 07:59 PM
thanks again! and God bless us all!

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Sun 03/02/08 08:02 PM


rollingthunder729 Joined Sun 03/02/08 Posts: 10	Sun 03/02/08 08:15 PM
if it comes from your heart, guided by your soul, you can never go wrong, love is forever long. good poem cudos :)

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sun 03/02/08 11:44 PM
not bad at all... looking forward to reading more.

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