I've heard it all before
About your advice
I'm gonna tell you now
It's not worth the price

You tell me that you care
Well I don't give a damn
Cause if you really did
You'de leave me as I am

Tell me to be perfect
That's a hard role to play
Just stay out of my life
Let me live it my way

I tried with all my might
Did the best that I could
I'll never be the best
You just misunderstood

You never liked my friends
You would always be rude
Let me tell you something
I'm in the fighting mood

Gonna fight for my rights
Enough of your routine
Gonna live life my own life
And not be a machine

you tell 'em

good job

wow see that was really good,we all need to live our own life and not let any one change the person we are..good write hope to see you here more

good one

PKH, I am not good at posting, but I do speak my mind

I thank you all! I would love honesty(brutal) in the future! I learn from comments back and respect all of you and your opinions!

Good job!
I feel like that now.
Ready to Whoop some....
Two Thumbs UP!!

Sounds like you've met my ex....lol. I liked the portrayal of thoughts and emotion.

There were alot of things in my life going on and I felt trapped! I like the comparison to you X as I do mine! Hope you enjoyed!

Good job were all here to write our thoughts,good,bad,happy,sad etc and write from the heart,and honesty

Very good write. The flow was very smooth and the meaning was quite clear. Nice job

~Den

Thank you all! Now I am looking at all my old stuff

very nice! can only imagine what made you write that but could feel the emotion... hope you find your happy

OK, one more. If I am getting old let me know! Please guess what it is

The tireless sentinel
That guides them through the night
Protects them from darkness
And provides them with light

Through all types of weather
She will always appear
To show them the true way
And tell them where to steer

She stands watchful and alert
And never will she fail
To see her, was there grail

a light house?


good one

Dang, Lurchs_sister, you are the VERY FIRST one to guess that! Congrats! And thank you all for letting me share tonight!