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Topic: ~The Key~
ellgee1976's photo
Sun 12/24/06 10:46 PM
When you returned my flirt,
My pain seemed so far gone,
My soul free from all hurt,
We talked from night until dawn.

It seems so long ago,
I heard you on the line,
You left my heart aglow,
I never knew it could shine.

Now it seems you withdrew,
All things you gave to me,
The confusion cuts through,
In my place, wouldn't you agree?

Your feelings about me,
Do they scare here to there?
I only want your wall's key,
I'm not going anywhere.

On your walls I'll still knock,
Cause foremost I'm your friend,
In time you will unlock,
A life of love we will spend

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Mon 12/25/06 06:59 AM
LG very nice, I enjoyed that.Silly:):)

escapedlunatic's photo
Mon 12/25/06 07:49 AM
Goodone my ryhming friend..nice work!

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 12/25/06 08:01 AM
Very good ellgee maybe soon they
will find that key and unlock those
feelings themselves :)

Cybear's photo
Mon 12/25/06 08:34 AM
Merry Christmas!BEAUTIFUL~WORDS!ELLGEE,I loved that poem very much.But
these words sadden the bear.My Christmas prayer for you is that he
searches deep down within his heart and realizes all that has been lost
and forsaken.For then he will come to realize how foolish his actions
and choices have been,and at such a dear cost that has been payed for
them.Only then will he find this key that has been cast aside,and with
it he will be able to unlock this heavy door and pass through it and
return into your arms,heart, and very soul.A person whom is beautiful as
yourself leave not mere prints but very deep impressions upon a man's
heart.This man may be able to slightly cover over these tracks
gently,however he will never be able to remove them.Trust me dear:he is
there but has yet to utilize this key.My Christmas prayer for you is
that he does find it and use it;for it holds one of the finest treasures
that he will be graced with upon God's earth.I wish for no man to cast
asunder such great treasures that he may gain in life,however I feel he
is foolish if he does because quite frankly not many are granted to us
within our lifetime.Merry Christmas!ellgee.(hug)Cybear.

ellgee1976's photo
Mon 12/25/06 09:32 PM
thanx everyone that posted, let's just hope he see's this and knows
where i stand...im not goin anywhere ;)

Gryphyn's photo
Mon 12/25/06 09:35 PM
I am sure he will see, how could he not?

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Mon 12/25/06 09:38 PM
Well LG, I believe that I to have had the NEED for MANY KEYS.

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Mon 12/25/06 10:07 PM
very sweet lg I hope he does :) I have but one key and I hope someday to
find the lock it belongs to

ellgee1976's photo
Tue 12/26/06 01:00 PM
i hear ya mike..i have a key myself..but it only unlocks MY walls

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 12/26/06 01:03 PM
Ohhh we all have a key to unlock our own walls but sometimes we don't
see that we have built that wall until someone points it out to us.

michael1313's photo
Tue 12/26/06 01:10 PM
Hey LG...
I know the number of a good "Locksmith"...

Good read girl,
hopes your #1 reads and understands it's worth!!!

ellgee1976's photo
Tue 12/26/06 02:39 PM
michael..lol

i don't want break in..i want him to LET me in..on hiw own free
will..lol

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Tue 12/26/06 02:56 PM
Good words LG, I really dig them!!

karmafury's photo
Tue 12/26/06 04:07 PM
Hope he finds that key.


J'espere qu'il trouve la clef.

lionsbrew's photo
Tue 12/26/06 05:02 PM
a very nice peom lg.

michael1313's photo
Tue 12/26/06 05:07 PM
yea...good write LG...M.

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 12/27/06 02:55 PM
TRUST is the KEY...
The fear of falling and not being able to get up
is what really keeps us down...isnt it???

ellgee1976's photo
Wed 12/27/06 02:58 PM
i think you're right SCG...trust is a key

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Wed 12/27/06 03:00 PM
Okay....LG.....for the longest time you were considered a heartless
hagg....by all except me....this poem exploits a side of you rarely
seen....keep it coming....!

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