Topic: ~The Key~ | |
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When you returned my flirt,
My pain seemed so far gone, My soul free from all hurt, We talked from night until dawn. It seems so long ago, I heard you on the line, You left my heart aglow, I never knew it could shine. Now it seems you withdrew, All things you gave to me, The confusion cuts through, In my place, wouldn't you agree? Your feelings about me, Do they scare here to there? I only want your wall's key, I'm not going anywhere. On your walls I'll still knock, Cause foremost I'm your friend, In time you will unlock, A life of love we will spend |
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LG very nice, I enjoyed that.Silly:):)
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Goodone my ryhming friend..nice work!
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Very good ellgee maybe soon they
will find that key and unlock those feelings themselves :) |
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Merry Christmas!BEAUTIFUL~WORDS!ELLGEE,I loved that poem very much.But
these words sadden the bear.My Christmas prayer for you is that he searches deep down within his heart and realizes all that has been lost and forsaken.For then he will come to realize how foolish his actions and choices have been,and at such a dear cost that has been payed for them.Only then will he find this key that has been cast aside,and with it he will be able to unlock this heavy door and pass through it and return into your arms,heart, and very soul.A person whom is beautiful as yourself leave not mere prints but very deep impressions upon a man's heart.This man may be able to slightly cover over these tracks gently,however he will never be able to remove them.Trust me dear:he is there but has yet to utilize this key.My Christmas prayer for you is that he does find it and use it;for it holds one of the finest treasures that he will be graced with upon God's earth.I wish for no man to cast asunder such great treasures that he may gain in life,however I feel he is foolish if he does because quite frankly not many are granted to us within our lifetime.Merry Christmas!ellgee.(hug)Cybear. |
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thanx everyone that posted, let's just hope he see's this and knows
where i stand...im not goin anywhere ;) |
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I am sure he will see, how could he not?
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Well LG, I believe that I to have had the NEED for MANY KEYS.
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very sweet lg I hope he does :) I have but one key and I hope someday to
find the lock it belongs to |
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i hear ya mike..i have a key myself..but it only unlocks MY walls
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Ohhh we all have a key to unlock our own walls but sometimes we don't
see that we have built that wall until someone points it out to us. |
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Hey LG...
I know the number of a good "Locksmith"... Good read girl, hopes your #1 reads and understands it's worth!!! |
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michael..lol
i don't want break in..i want him to LET me in..on hiw own free will..lol |
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Good words LG, I really dig them!!
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Hope he finds that key.
J'espere qu'il trouve la clef. |
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a very nice peom lg.
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yea...good write LG...M.
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TRUST is the KEY...
The fear of falling and not being able to get up is what really keeps us down...isnt it??? |
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i think you're right SCG...trust is a key
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Okay....LG.....for the longest time you were considered a heartless
hagg....by all except me....this poem exploits a side of you rarely seen....keep it coming....! |
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