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Topic: lovers tale
otterman Joined Fri 12/21/07 Posts: 623	Wed 02/27/08 08:34 AM
As we lay huddled entwined,seperate yet one,our bodies quiver,the anticipation,nearly painfull,i feel your hot breath on my neck,your chest heave into mine,such soft supple beauty,a touch frozen in time for all ages,as our eyes meet,we both know,perfection pales in the light we create,your sweet smell of yearning,pouring from every pore,its taste of honey,surely this is the fresh morning dew of eden itself,as my cheek traces your navel,writhing i feel the pulse grow,our breath meets, as your loins welcome me to what is rightfully mine,for as your body clentches,as you close your eyes,all doubt removed by an instance of purity,puzzed,amazed,yet none of this matters,eluding yet inviting all at once,as we shudder in the dance of the immortals,our eyes meet once again,without seeking for they have found what they need.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 02/27/08 08:37 AM
very nice what a dance it was

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 02/27/08 08:42 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh My,,,, WoW!!!!! Kinda left me speechless,, Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm yes,, I will say,,, Damnnnnnnnnnnnn I like,,, I like

lizethmarina Joined Thu 12/20/07 Posts: 229	Wed 02/27/08 09:08 AM
ohhhhhhhhhh, getting hot over here, very nice!

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Wed 02/27/08 09:32 AM
Most excellent otterman.

countrybumpkin2u Joined Thu 02/21/08 Posts: 1238	Wed 02/27/08 10:41 AM
As we lay huddled entwined,seperate yet one,our bodies quiver,the anticipation,nearly painfull,i feel your hot breath on my neck,your chest heave into mine,such soft supple beauty,a touch frozen in time for all ages,as our eyes meet,we both know,perfection pales in the light we create,your sweet smell of yearning,pouring from every pore,its taste of honey,surely this is the fresh morning dew of eden itself,as my cheek traces your navel,writhing i feel the pulse grow,our breath meets, as your loins welcome me to what is rightfully mine,for as your body clentches,as you close your eyes,all doubt removed by an instance of purity,puzzed,amazed,yet none of this matters,eluding yet inviting all at once,as we shudder in the dance of the immortals,our eyes meet once again,without seeking for they have found what they need. I dunno what to feel Umm... do I feel turned on? Do I feel ... Oh MY!!! Goodness! WOW! MERCY! SUKI SUKI NOW!!! Why can't there be one Otter for every woman?

otterman Joined Fri 12/21/07 Posts: 623	Wed 02/27/08 10:48 AM
thanx everbody major passion build up goin on

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 02/27/08 05:38 PM
There isnt a steam emotioncon... darn it...

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Wed 02/27/08 05:38 PM
shazam

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