Topic: The Storm Of Calm
Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 02/27/08 07:22 AM
The Storm Of Calm

The rumble in the distance
Like a stampede
Unleased upon the sky,
Waiting for the thunder
And the rain to comfort
This inner sigh.

My mind aloft as clouds pass by
Which sparks an inner thought,
Something which was dormant,
Becomes something that is sought.

The stirrings within this wretched soul
Become annoyance to heavy pain,
Here I sit and wonder,
Where is that blasted rain.

Caught up in day to day,
The rush of life will pass me by,
Listen to the trickle
As the tears fall from the sky.

My soul renewed in comfort,
My thoughts erased by sound,
Listening to that gentle rumble
As raindrops kiss the ground.

Nature has it's way
To find the calm in me,
Just as music calms the beast,
The thunderstorm
Will always set me free.

Fadedspirit 2/27/2008

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 02/27/08 07:29 AM
For me its the wind, nice depiction........

pkh's photo
Wed 02/27/08 07:30 AM
you are very giftedflowerforyou

countrybumpkin2u's photo
Wed 02/27/08 07:31 AM
OK!! ONE WORD>>
GOOSEBUMPS!flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 02/27/08 07:39 AM
Very cool dkw! Thanks for reading. :smile:

Awww, thanks pkh....:smile:

I hope them are good goosebumps countrybumkin, if you're cold I have a warm blanket you can have. :smile:


MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 02/27/08 05:30 PM
Truely a gifted writer!
flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou