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Topic: Rising Tide
klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Tue 02/26/08 05:49 PM
Visions of my past echo across the vast seas of my mind. Darkness takes hold where light once stood its ground. Dreams laid waste by the onslaught of life. Gods eyes shine upon me no more. The blackness is deafening in this hollow soul. Dredged deep by years of sorrow. Waves of pain sweep away all hope left, on the shores of my heart. An eternal ocean of sorrow surrounds my diminishing island of hope. The tide is coming in for the last time... DB 2/26/2008

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Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Tue 02/26/08 10:57 PM
Such an eloquent writer

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Wed 02/27/08 06:30 AM
I liked the imagery, nice write klugman.

klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Wed 02/27/08 07:05 AM
Thankyou for the comments

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 02/27/08 07:31 AM


TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76438	Wed 02/27/08 05:38 PM
good one

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