Topic: Fallin'
lizethmarina's photo
Tue 02/26/08 11:40 AM
Edited by lizethmarina on Tue 02/26/08 11:41 AM
No more words, let me lose myself in the depths of your eyes
No more words, let your body tell me all your lips no longer can
No more words, turn off the light, lay next to me, hold me until the next morn light
No more words, thaw the ice, melt the snow, fill it with the pasion of a burning love

No more tears, they have faded, wiped away by your soft hands
No more lies to myself thinking I would never find anything true again
No more doubts, they were blown by the wind after our first kiss
Sweet first kiss, revealing what's next for you and me.

Could it be a lifetime of love, sharing, companionship?
Or just a moment of passion, guarded by a blanket of repent
No more thoughts, no more words, no more doubts
It's you who I want to give myself to

After your promise made that you will only be mine
Can I tell you, I could be yours until the light fades from the sun.


Marina.
S.A.B.
smooched :heart: smooched

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 02/26/08 11:41 AM
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Shaden's photo
Tue 02/26/08 11:42 AM
touching flowerforyou

timmyschillin's photo
Tue 02/26/08 11:42 AM
Interesting write. I enjoyed it.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 02/26/08 11:50 AM
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lizethmarina's photo
Tue 02/26/08 01:40 PM
Mirror, flowerforyou

Shaden, flowerforyou

Timmy, glad you enjoyed it flowerforyou

MsTeddy drinker to you! flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Tue 02/26/08 01:41 PM
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Very Nice flowerforyou

countrybumpkin2u's photo
Tue 02/26/08 02:09 PM
Man!!! It just gets better and better with you!!
I am a HUGE fan!!flowerforyou

lizethmarina's photo
Tue 02/26/08 04:32 PM
Thanks Mom flowerforyou

Country, girl i am a fan of yours too! drinker flowerforyou drinker

kc0003's photo
Tue 02/26/08 04:37 PM
once agian your heart shows
nice write

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lizethmarina's photo
Tue 02/26/08 06:50 PM
Awwwww, thanks KC, you are always so sweet to me flowerforyou

love2loveu's photo
Tue 02/26/08 10:35 PM
Edited by love2loveu on Tue 02/26/08 10:36 PM
Girl, your writing is so deep. Your writing is beautiful. I'm a writer myself, have been so for a very long time and when you see that quality of work through someone else's writing, then you know you're good. let that ink flow girl, you have a great gift!!!!!!!

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Tue 02/26/08 10:59 PM
*applause*



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Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 02/27/08 06:41 AM
Very nice. :smile:

pkh's photo
Wed 02/27/08 07:32 AM
very niceflowerforyou

lizethmarina's photo
Wed 02/27/08 09:06 AM
Awww, thanks love2, do you post your poems here? I would love to read some of your work. Thanks for your words and as long as there is MS word, blank sheets of paper and ink, i'll keep writing :smile: flowerforyou

storm, bowing, thank you flowerforyou

faded, always good vibes. flowerforyou

phk, thanks. flowerforyou