Topic: Untitled for Her
timmyschillin's photo
Tue 02/26/08 11:29 AM
Edited by timmyschillin on Tue 02/26/08 11:45 AM
I'm in a daze and my thoughts simmer
Head's all blimpy and I don't care
Saw my baby down by the river
Knew she'd have to come up soon for air

Sweet Sherry come on under the covers
We can have high times if you'll abide
We can discover the wonders of nature
Rolling in the rushes down by the riverside

when I touch you I feel happy inside
It's such a feeling that I cannot hide
through thick and thin and boiling the tides
you light my wick and I burn inside

when things are bleak from dawn to dusk
its only you that I choose to trust
its only your love I'll take if I must
its sweet surrender when it's just us

If you only knew how far I'm falling
just to satisfy a warm cry calling
you'd see a little tiny infant newt
wearing his soul as a bowl of fruit

As an apple from high up atop
It's just me, a lonely rain drop
Head over heels and right on cue
I think I'm falling in love with you

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 02/26/08 11:32 AM
Nice write! drinker

timmyschillin's photo
Tue 02/26/08 11:39 AM
Thanks Ms Teddy! flowerforyou

lizethmarina's photo
Tue 02/26/08 11:47 AM
Sooooo sweet! Loved it! :heart: flowerforyou

otterman's photo
Tue 02/26/08 11:48 AM
good write timdrinker

timmyschillin's photo
Tue 02/26/08 11:54 AM
Thanks guys, I appreciate it. Wrote this one on V-Day. I should start writing for hallmark, bwahah.. Ya right. :)

Gabriella's photo
Tue 02/26/08 11:54 AM
ok so I recognize the first one.....The Greatful Dead "sugar magnolia" but what is the second one????

timmyschillin's photo
Tue 02/26/08 11:56 AM
Yea, there's a reference to the Grateful Dead and the Beatles. :]

Gabriella's photo
Tue 02/26/08 12:07 PM
its driving me crazy what song??

lizardking19's photo
Tue 02/26/08 12:23 PM

when I touch you I feel happy inside
It's such a feeling that I cannot hide



im not a dead-head but thats from "I wanna hold ur hand"

mteagle31's photo
Tue 02/26/08 12:35 PM
drinker drinker

timmyschillin's photo
Tue 02/26/08 01:02 PM
My boss is a dead head. 70 shows under his belt, and crazy mentality to go along with it.

LAMom's photo
Tue 02/26/08 01:24 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

countrybumpkin2u's photo
Tue 02/26/08 02:11 PM
OMG!!! Your gonna make me fall in love with you!!
CALM DOWM....JK

Great writeflowerforyou

timmyschillin's photo
Tue 02/26/08 02:26 PM
haha thanks... I'm glad u liked it! :)