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Alone as all hell
in my cold room I wait the things Id never tell always confessed too late those silent whispers through prayers never sent and soon i would miss her more than I had ever meant I love you like I have always wanted to through you I see my life and I would die to be with you My every wish and every thought in my mind could revolve around you a thousand times I'm in love with you and only you I feel your passion consume me and your kiss brings me to life I would sacrifice a thousand dreams through you I fantasize I feel your breath on my shoulder is this what heaven could be because I'm living in this paradise everytime you come to me |
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you are gonna melt her hert with this JT...lol...M.
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typo
hert=heart |
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cool JT!!!!!!!!!
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Ahh JT fine words there my friend fine words.
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good job JT.wish i could express like that.
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How you can come up these I will never know but I love reading your
work. Later. V |
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Awwww very sweet words they are!
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thanks so much guys
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JT u need to start a class to teach us all how to write that
way,,,,excellent job, well done!!!!!!!!!! |
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beautiful...
absolutely beatuiful... wonderful magical words that go straight to the heart... |
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that was so pretty baby i cried again damn you.LOL
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Im just full of it,aren't I.....LOL
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Heck Ya!Another awesome one JT.Love your Poetry bro,keep them coming
please.This is the most precious way for us all to express ourselves.Not to mention it allows us to vent our feelings and perhaps even bring closure sometimes in our life.Amen!Godspeed!Cybear:) |
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