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A soft breeze whispers
my name in your ear and a faint hint of my perfume mingled with spring will bring my face to mind You play a Stolen song and I sing along in a voice that only you ... ... can hear... Remember me A bright thought occurs to you and you turn to share finding nothing but air heavy with emptiness I wont be there ... Remember me A a gentle look a feminine sigh another lonely day goes by With the distance between us ever widening a breach a rift as you watch me drift further and further away to the place where you pushed me ... Remember me Words dancing rapidly straight from the heart unwanted painful unread ... A song half sung destined to remain unfinished A shadow dance once reality Now and forever only a dream we shared Remember me ... Remember me ... Remember me ... I will remember you .. @phoenix february 22, 2008 |
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 NICE
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Very nice.
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(((MsWizard)))
Sometimes a thump on the forhead helps! Nice write! 
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i never comment on poems....but wow!
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NICE
Thank you Linnie
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Very nice. Thank you!...Rosie??? 
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(((MsWizard)))
Sometimes a thump on the forhead helps! Nice write!
Or a swift kick in the azzzzzz?? 
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i never comment on poems....but wow! Why thank you Eurowid! I do appreciate you commenting on mine!
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Edited by
Fadedspirit
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Fri 02/22/08 05:15 PM
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Though I'm particular to thumps on the forehead.....lol, (geesh, there's a MsTeddy reading my mind) A gentle coaxing upon light breath also works well in most times.
Very nice write MsWizard. 
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Though I'm particular to thumps on the forehead.....lol, (geesh, there's a MsTeddy reading my mind) A gentle coaxing upon light breath also works well in most times. Very nice write MsWizard.
Thank you Sweetheart...I always appreciate your comments!!
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Awww, you're very welcome MsWizard. I always enjoy reading these pieces of your heart.
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Awww, you're very welcome MsWizard. I always enjoy reading these pieces of your heart. Just don't lose them Faded...they're all I have..... |
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Ahh, my dear lady, sentiment is something I am good with, especially when I can put together that which is taken apart.
Almost every word is taken and inscribed inside my heart. |
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Ahh, my dear lady, sentiment is something I am good with, especially when I can put together that which is taken apart. Almost every word is taken and inscribed inside my heart.
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Remember, the winds may carry your heart in a drift, but the silent music it plays upon my heart is a gift.
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you are in good books, you were remember, you are remember, and you will remember forever
A soft breeze whispers my name in your ear and a faint hint of my perfume mingled with spring will bring my face to mind You play a Stolen song and I sing along in a voice that only you ... ... can hear... Remember me A bright thought occurs to you and you turn to share finding nothing but air heavy with emptiness I wont be there ... Remember me A a gentle look a feminine sigh another lonely day goes by With the distance between us ever widening a breach a rift as you watch me drift further and further away to the place where you pushed me ... Remember me Words dancing rapidly straight from the heart unwanted painful unread ... A song half sung destined to remain unfinished A shadow dance once reality Now and forever only a dream we shared Remember me ... Remember me ... Remember me ... I will remember you .. @phoenix february 22, 2008 |
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mswiz
a very fine write here as always
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