Topic: Questions Of Endearment
Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/22/08 09:07 AM
Questions Of Endearment

A lady asked her lover
What he felt inside,
He wouldn't give the answer,
For fear of foolish pride.

She spoke his name so clear,
As tears began to fall,
Then she asked the questions
And hoped he wouldn't stall.

Would it break your heart,
If you saw the tears I cried?
Would you understand my thoughts,
If I pulled them from the light?

If you couldn't see
These eyes that look at you,
Would you feel me staring,
As I so often do?

Would you feel my hold,
If my loving arms fell weak?
Would you feel the love,
If my lips refused to speak?

If my breath no longer gave,
Would the pain cut like a knife?
If I closed my eyes in death,
Would you love me back to life?

A lump had formed within his throat,
As tears had crushed his pride.
The answers, although easy,
Were spoken out of stride.

Beloved hear my heartbeat
And hear my gift so true,
Each answer that I give
Speaks my deepest love for you.

Fadedspirit 2/22/2008

Differentkindofwench's photo
Fri 02/22/08 09:10 AM
mmmm, your bardic gift if wonderful to behold, faded.........

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/22/08 09:16 AM
Thanks dkw. :smile:

no photo
Fri 02/22/08 09:18 AM
flowerforyou yOU should really get these published!!bigsmile

pkh's photo
Fri 02/22/08 09:19 AM
beautifulflowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/22/08 09:29 AM
Maybe one day Gypsy. Thanks. :smile:


Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/22/08 09:29 AM
Awww, thanks pkh.

wateraddict's photo
Fri 02/22/08 09:39 AM
sweetflowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 02/22/08 11:31 AM
Someday some lady is going to be blessed with your love...
Once again another fabulouse write my friend! drinker

NvrLknBk's photo
Fri 02/22/08 02:01 PM
That is beautiful bro....If I can stop crying for a minute I'll read it again! Thanks!

shauna22's photo
Fri 02/22/08 02:53 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou from your no 1 fan x

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/22/08 05:52 PM
Thanks wateraddict.:smile:

Maybe somewhere out there in time, if I don't miss her MsTeddyBear. A heartfelt thanks to you. :smile:

Thanks NvrLknBk, You're welcome bro.drinker

Awww, thanks to my lady from a land far away, but whose heart is as close as a whisper. Thanks. :smile: