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LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 02/22/08 12:48 AM
Shadows of life surround Darkness.. stillness,, air taken Remembering past life Living conscious,, stillness awaken State of mind,,, Unconscious No awaken in time Spirits speak Listen,, Destiny,,, Life,,,, Re-birth Land of weak Darkness,, my calm Sand beneath my feet Motionless,,, Transcendent in time Grounded is my Soul Mute is my mind Yes..... Footprints,,,, Traces of me Past,, yet Present Re-Birth My Soul

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Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Fri 02/22/08 09:23 AM
Turn your face lovely one! quickly on your cheek quick squanch and I'm off to laugh with the fairies --- we're having a toadstool race today you know. The effect is the same as Dorie and Marlin bouncing along on the jellyfish in Finding Nemo. "Cycles" or "Cyclic Notation" pops in my head.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Fri 02/22/08 11:26 AM
(((Denise)))

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Fri 02/22/08 02:41 PM
superb mom Shadows of life surround Darkness.. stillness,, air taken Remembering past life Living conscious,, stillness awaken State of mind,,, Unconscious No awaken in time Spirits speak Listen,, Destiny,,, Life,,,, Re-birth Land of weak Darkness,, my calm Sand beneath my feet Motionless,,, Transcendent in time Grounded is my Soul Mute is my mind Yes..... Footprints,,,, Traces of me Past,, yet Present Re-Birth My Soul

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Fri 02/22/08 05:58 PM
Very Nice.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 02/23/08 07:21 AM
Turn your face lovely one! quickly on your cheek quick squanch and I'm off to laugh with the fairies --- we're having a toadstool race today you know. The effect is the same as Dorie and Marlin bouncing along on the jellyfish in Finding Nemo. "Cycles" or "Cyclic Notation" pops in my head. Yes,,, I shall go with Cycles,...,. Fairies,, Toadstools, Jellyfish and Nemo ohhhhhhhhhhh the wonders of the world,, ohhhhhhhhhhh the Joy,, the Fun,, I shall go close my eyes and invision this beauty,,, the dance the laughter,,, I so love my family,,,,, Mmmmmmmmmmmm Hugs & Kiss's

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 02/23/08 07:32 AM
and we love you

izzie Joined Wed 02/21/07 Posts: 31834	Sat 02/23/08 09:42 AM
((((((((((((mom)))))))))))))))

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 02/23/08 10:10 AM
and we love you yes we do... you with your beutiful heart and soul

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Sat 02/23/08 01:28 PM
Wow!my angel.U have been writing some very deep & thought provoking words.I love this sweetheart.Look closer @ the sand along side ur prints & U will find other footprints ;)much luv,CyPoet/Steven(((bear~hug)))

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 02/23/08 01:49 PM
Wow!my angel.U have been writing some very deep & thought provoking words.I love this sweetheart.Look closer @ the sand along side ur prints & U will find other footprints ;)much luv,CyPoet/Steven(((bear~hug))) I've have a great teacher ((( hmmmmmmm he kinda looks like a bear )))) Love you Steven,,, (((( kc ))))) ((((( Pam )))))) (((( izzie )))))) never ending love,,, pores from me to you

robertsonm30 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 79	Sat 02/23/08 01:51 PM
an aewsome write Mom

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LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 02/23/08 01:52 PM
an aewsome write Mom Thank you sweetie,,, I have come to enjoy your writes,, Quite the poet you are..

robertsonm30 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 79	Sat 02/23/08 01:54 PM
Thank you Mom but i have much to learn im am new to the poetry wourld lol