Topic: hole in heavens floor
lonelyteardrop's photo
Tue 12/19/06 07:13 AM
as I set and watch the stars
I wonder if his looking down
from the heavens through
that hole on heavens floor
does he feel me and know
how I miss him even more
I've been told that time
heals as the minutes
tick on by,
when the sun comes out
an I feel the warmth
I wonder if his sending
that warmth through
that hole in heavens floor

when it starts to rain
is this his tears
because he knows i'm
so lonely with him gone

so if he knows, and
if it's true, then
the holes in heavens
floor, his heart
knows that my love is
still true,

no photo
Tue 12/19/06 07:17 AM
oh my ..I need a moment here

So sadly beautiful my lil jellohead..I cried

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 12/19/06 08:00 AM
Girl that was Awesome, but the tears through heavens floor that he sends
is to clean your soul for he wants you to remember him but.... he wants
you to see there is still life out there for you. You still have a life
time to love and live life and that is what he expects you to do!! So
when you remember him let it bring a smile to your face not a teardrop
remember the good times not the sad bring love into your heart and let
the pain start to subside. Let your heart feel the love from those
around you and stand beside you on your journey that life still holds
for you. Live your life to the fullest and those teardrops will become
rays of sunshine instead thro heavens floor.

michael1313's photo
Tue 12/19/06 08:10 AM
good poem Lonely...got tissue?

greeneyedlady42's photo
Tue 12/19/06 08:33 AM
All I can say is...

WOW!

michael1313's photo
Tue 12/19/06 08:49 AM
didn't Eirc Clapton write a song about this?
"Tears in Heaven"???

no photo
Tue 12/19/06 08:51 AM
Yes he wrote a song called Tears In Heaven but its nothingl like this

michael1313's photo
Tue 12/19/06 09:07 AM
well yea it was about his son...
but still tears...for a lost loved one...?

Morena350's photo
Tue 12/19/06 11:53 AM
lonely, you just made me cry girl, we do have something in common, I
wish I could write my feelings like that,
maybe I wont feel so lonely and angry for his death,,,

Ontario's photo
Tue 12/19/06 12:11 PM
That was so sincere.....!

lonelyteardrop's photo
Tue 12/19/06 12:16 PM
thank you ontario,

Morena, if you ever want to just talk let me know

ellgee1976's photo
Tue 12/19/06 12:23 PM
*wipes her eyes*


thanx ltd..awesome, simply awesome

escapedlunatic's photo
Tue 12/19/06 01:21 PM
Wow...a very heart-filled peice..I am very touched. Nice work.

no photo
Tue 12/19/06 05:25 PM
SEE TEAR, YOU DO HAVE SOME GREAT FRIENDS HERE.........
AND, YOUR WORDS HERE FROM YOUR SOUL TO HIS, HIS SOUL HEARS, YOU.
AND GOD BLESS THE ONE'S WHO HAVE PASSED, AND FEELS YOUR HEART WITH HIS
LOVE TO GO FOWARD.

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 12/19/06 05:39 PM
Humm huhhh you do need to post more poems girl
this one goes straight to the heart and grabs on.

catchme_ifucan's photo
Sun 12/24/06 12:55 AM
When I read this on the 19th it made me cry soo hard!!
I had to ask myself was I crying for her lost or ours???
He was calling her then.. this was her way of sayin it....

Beka,Thank you for coming into our lives, as you know you didn't miss a
one of us! blessed be!!