Topic: Running Blind
klugman's photo
Wed 02/20/08 11:09 AM
Walking calmly thru the woods
Coming home from town
I'm feelin good
Suddenly the night has come
Darkness takes hold
To fear I succomb
Hard footsteps, cracking branches
With nervous laughter
I take a backward glance
Running hard thru the trees
I can hardly believe what I see
A dark shadow very tall
Running towards me
My fear explodes
Tripping on a broken branch
I fall in thorns they cut my hands
Crawling thru the sticking vines
In my mind I know its time
Thunderous roar fills the air
God be with me I'm so scared
On my feet running mad
Please dont let this end bad
Blindly thrashing thru the gloom
Right behind me is my doom
But when I thought all hope is lost
My name is called out in the dark
Turning while running I look back
To see my dad running behind
The tree I run into stops me flat
I slammed into it while looking back
Waking up in my bed
Blood is caked upon my head

DB

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 02/20/08 11:12 AM
Ouch! drinker :smile:

pkh's photo
Wed 02/20/08 11:46 AM
wow that was awesome,I felt I was there

klugman's photo
Wed 02/20/08 12:20 PM
True Story...

Thanksflowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Wed 02/20/08 12:25 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 02/20/08 12:33 PM
That was really good enjoyed itbigsmile

Makes me wonder what was ya doing you were not suppose to be doing?:wink:

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 02/20/08 05:06 PM
Excellent klugman. Couldn't help but laugh at the end there, I've been there too. :smile:

klugman's photo
Wed 02/20/08 06:59 PM

That was really good enjoyed itbigsmile

Makes me wonder what was ya doing you were not suppose to be doing?:wink:


I'll never tell:tongue:

Thanx for the comments you guys, and gals...flowerforyou