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ponchopollito · 2008-02-12T19:32:40-08:00

As I soar through the sky rivlets of wax flow from my wings on a blistering journey down my skin. I fly higher. Though my flesh melts away I continue to rise. Tormented, with pain as my guide, I reach for the light, watching as all that I am slips through my fingers. Broken and falling, I can not help but think, I almost reached the sun.

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ponchopollito Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 55	Tue 02/12/08 07:32 PM
As I soar through the sky rivlets of wax flow from my wings on a blistering journey down my skin. I fly higher. Though my flesh melts away I continue to rise. Tormented, with pain as my guide, I reach for the light, watching as all that I am slips through my fingers. Broken and falling, I can not help but think, I almost reached the sun.

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Tue 02/12/08 07:33 PM
GOOD JOB

ponchopollito Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 55	Tue 02/12/08 07:35 PM
thanx

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Tue 02/12/08 07:42 PM
deep, poetic and cool

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 02/12/08 08:02 PM
Release it all and breath and fly to be free

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