Topic: Searching
MorganAries1's photo
Tue 02/12/08 02:32 PM
"Searching"

My fingers may tire
But my mind is on fire
Withe a burning hope, a desire
I seek the truth
And with this passion, I become a sleuth
Searching for my "x" on the map
And avoiding the trap
I seek answers
To my ideas' tiny dancers
That spin and twirl like neon lights
Leaving me to see such strange sights
I ponder on each event
But I still have no idea what they meant
Should I follow my flighty mind
And go in it blind?
Or should I think more
Until my head is sore?
The facts are what I need
So I'll just plead....
...Please.... Just tell me....
Put my mind at ease and just leave me be.......

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 02/12/08 02:35 PM
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fastlinnie's photo
Tue 02/12/08 02:36 PM
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pkh's photo
Tue 02/12/08 03:09 PM
very nice look forward to moreflowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 02/12/08 06:34 PM
Nice write....look forward to reading more! happy

MorganAries1's photo
Tue 02/12/08 11:16 PM
Thanks.... I don't know if I'll be writing much more.... Need inspiration.... Plus, extremely busy with art right now.

2Btrue2One's photo
Wed 02/13/08 02:35 AM

Thanks.... I don't know if I'll be writing much more.... Need inspiration.... Plus, extremely busy with art right now.


Very nice one, like you I have to be inspired to write as well, I always write from my heart, my experiences, from things that move me.. and try to put a story into each poem I wtite.. very good poem I must say.. thank you for sharing flowerforyou