Basically I wrote this for the guy I fell for, and had the courage to show him.... pretty much, told me he loved it and it was beautiful, and wrote poetry for another chick. Just my luck huh?

"Puzzle Pieces"

Dark eyes penetrate my mind
I wonder what they're trying to find
Large hands caress my skin
Makes me confused about these men
Soft kisses on my cheek
Has my mind scrambled for a week
Winking at me with that playful smile
Just seems to add onto the pile
My cheeks burn
and I have to turn
Only to feel your warm embrace
This touch always makes my heart race
I just want to know why
Why each time I see you I leave with a natural high?
Why am I falling for you?
What did I do?
From first glance I knew
And each time I saw you these feelings grew.
Now a couple hundred miles away
I am counting to the day
To see your face...
Then finally....
The puzzle pieces will fall in place.

good job

Good write...

Thanks ya'll. It just hurts to have a guy you fall for instantly (kind of like what happened with him) and he's extremely cryptic.

And what's worse, he is a poet, so he plays with words and it's so confusing.... I like to be straight forward about things.... I hate playing around subjects and how he does it confuses the hell outta me.

Excellent write.

Sorry to hear of your pain.

I like it
happy valentines day