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Topic: All that I am
2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 02/12/08 01:23 PM
All that I am
and what lay inside
is a man with a heart
where compassion abides

Who has the keys
to unlock my true being
to come in my life
and give it more meaning

There is so much I would do
so much I would say
so much I would give
to a special someone someday

My love I would give
for you to recieve
I would show you wonders
I would help you believe

My special angel is out there
but where I don't know
all I know is that one day
her face she will show

She would never be alone
or have anything to fear
because I would never forsake
someone so dear

I would hold her in my arms
I would put light in her eyes
we would hold eachother close
till the morning sunrise

I would never turn you away
you could always come to me
and together we would walk
through all eternity

By Daniel

To my special someone
where ever you are..

lizethmarina's photo
Tue 02/12/08 01:27 PM
So beautiful flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 02/12/08 01:31 PM
Beautiful write...

Hope your someone speciall finds you soon... flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Tue 02/12/08 01:34 PM
aww that was just beautiful I hope you find each otherflowerforyou

no photo
Tue 02/12/08 01:35 PM
AWSOME!!bigsmile drinker

jimz's photo
Tue 02/12/08 01:39 PM
Eternal words, their in your soul, when she comes like an angel into your life, these words, this poem, will, like a river into a sea, enter her heart.

peace
jimmy

2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 02/12/08 01:40 PM
Thank you all.. maybe one day.. time will tell
Tomarrow is a new day, with all that it brings
whether it be good or bad.. I will use the experience
and become a better man from it.. once again thanks all

hugs

Daniel

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 02/12/08 01:52 PM
Wow that is absolutely beautiful! bigsmile

2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 02/12/08 02:01 PM

Wow that is absolutely beautiful! bigsmile


Thank you kristi, I just wrote it today.. there is so much inspiration in here.. I would like to thank all of you for it..

sasfire75's photo
Tue 02/12/08 02:10 PM
I have got to say please be me lol jk but you never know...god will bring your special someone straight to you when she is ready to be known.....so hang in there not for long god might just bring her quicker than you thought.....you out done yourself once again very good poem

shauna22's photo
Tue 02/12/08 03:09 PM
flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 02/12/08 06:32 PM
Another great write 2Btrue!

2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 02/12/08 06:50 PM
Thanks to the rest of you as well

ellgee1976's photo
Wed 02/13/08 07:46 AM
awesome Daniel flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Wed 02/13/08 10:11 AM

awesome Daniel flowerforyou


Thank you ellgeeflowerforyou

Monosyllabic♥Girl's photo
Wed 02/13/08 02:38 PM
Someone has a lot to look forward to.

2Btrue2One's photo
Wed 02/13/08 02:57 PM

Someone has a lot to look forward to.


Thank you Katie.. I hear that a lot.. time will tell..

LAMom's photo
Thu 02/14/08 08:43 AM
Beautiful Daniel,,, flowerforyou

harleyfan15's photo
Thu 02/14/08 09:24 PM
beautiful daniel. i hope we can all find what we're looking for!! never give up!! that special someone we'er all looking for is out there some where. i hope u find her!

Puffins1958's photo
Thu 02/14/08 09:48 PM
very nice....touching

flowerforyou flowerforyou

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