Topic: My Journey
2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 02/12/08 06:13 AM
In my lifes journey
i've seen both good and bad
and sometimes I feel
so very sad

My enemies have come
they've cut me to my soul
and it's my destruction
that's their final goal

Why must I fight
please let me breath
why is it everyone
you wish to decieve

My wounds they do bleed
from your deception and lies
if you were to look closely
you'd see the pain in my eyes

I am a tortured soul
your attack has cut deep
you lead me to the slaughter
just like a sheep

Haven't you done enough
will I ever know peace
when I lay down
will I be able to sleep

I am only human
I have made my mistakes
Sometimes I want to pray the Lord
my soul to take

Is life really worth living
when you face all this alone
I am out numbered
I am on my own

In times of trouble
you reach out to friends
just to find out
their not there in the end

They turn their backs
and they watch you hurt
they make you feel like
you have no worth

When I was your friend
I stood by your side
I fought your enemies
with honor and pride

I cleaned your wounds
and I dried your tears
I helped you put away
all of your fears

Now in my time of trouble
when I needed all of you the most
you handed me over
for my enemies to roast

I am all alone
in this fight for my life
I don't know if this time
I will survive

By Daniel



pkh's photo
Tue 02/12/08 06:20 AM
wow good write but were never really alone,yesterday is gone we only have today so try to live like there's no tommorow.

digger56's photo
Tue 02/12/08 06:37 AM
Wow flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Tue 02/12/08 06:55 AM
Not alone my friend,, Angels of light walk with you,, guide you and lift you up when all else fails,,, Life is an obstacle with lots of bumps and set backs,, I can tell you from my own experience that it will get better with time,, Believe in your soul and when you feel you cant move forward,, Give out a big oleeeeeeeeeeeee scream,,, we'll all come running


Most awesome write,, thank you for sharing your soul with us,,

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2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 02/12/08 07:22 AM
Thank you all.. just one of those times for me right now
when enemies rise up to defame you with truth mixed with lies..

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 02/12/08 07:59 AM
Daniel sorry for your troubles I do hope you can over come them. Just look deep within everything you need is within.flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 02/12/08 08:04 AM
Thank you kristi.. you are a dear friend..and one that did stand by me through a very difficult time.. much appreciated..
hugs

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 02/12/08 08:21 AM
You are not alone...
Very good write!

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shauna22's photo
Tue 02/12/08 08:45 AM
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2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 02/12/08 11:29 AM

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Thanks MsTeddy, shaunaflowerforyou

sasfire75's photo
Tue 02/12/08 02:01 PM
Even though I havent known you for long,I still felt you deep in my soul.For I feel that way each and every day..But I look to god to help me keep my soul..So whenever in need of a friend please feel free to look for me and we will unite as one to over come that deep down ugly soul and push it away and bring back the pure and clean soul and get through the bad times...Nice poem I really can relate to it...

2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 02/12/08 02:06 PM

Even though I havent known you for long,I still felt you deep in my soul.For I feel that way each and every day..But I look to god to help me keep my soul..So whenever in need of a friend please feel free to look for me and we will unite as one to over come that deep down ugly soul and push it away and bring back the pure and clean soul and get through the bad times...Nice poem I really can relate to it...


Thank you.. I always write from my heart..