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Topic: ♥Just a Dream, a Hopeful Thought♥
Noden's photo
Thu 02/07/08 07:07 AM
Edited by Noden on Thu 02/07/08 07:17 AM
I watched you as you stepped out of your truck
crossing the street I couldn't keep my eyes off you
and there you where looking for me
I started to jog as I got closer
as soon as you saw this your feet started to move
closer, and closer
wrapping our arms around one another
we buried our faces into each others shoulder
you took my chin into your hand
and directed my face up toward your
eyes suddenly took the first meet
it seem like we knew each other always
not just the first time, but internally
we couldn't help but kiss, each others lips
sinking into the emotional bliss
we felt like we belong right of the start
hugging and talking, we didn't want to part
so off we went to set our day
got some coffee, and drove out on the highway
we laughed, and talked of everything in life
finally we came upon a place to stop
walking down through the forest
holding hands, while listening to birds sing
came upon a little stream
I placed a blanket for us on the ground
and look what else I found,
a picnic basket for of love
made for us,
slipping a cherry into your mouth
you lean in to me for me to take a part of
slowly I come closer to your lips,
then I pluck it from your mouth,
as we begin to chew,
our lips meet and start to kiss,
looking into those wondrous eyes,
I felt a shiver down deep inside,
taken me into your warm inviting chest,
We laid together, till late noon
kissing and hugging, only hoping soon
we'll be one throughout our life
with the love we share in gods light
you protest to me, you'd fill my heart with glee
as our eyes started to flutter closed
you pressed me into your wild essences trove
being together, flows through the trees
brushes by the meadows lands
whistles in and out the clouds
gushing wildly as it goes
passing a hand into the reeds
pushing by as it reaps
driving the cattails wildly and free
shaking all the seeds of love
what god has given us from above
laying back in the long grass
the wind caresses our faces
lifting us up from our past
drifting and sifting through the cast
oh, little ones don't feel down
cause in each other you found
setting your spirits free
so we let the winds carry us off
one day soon we'll see this through
as it was really meant to be.

♥NODEN♥

AKA; A.P
02/O7/08

Well maybe todays, not a good day for me and my poetry, oh well.glasses

Dashtall's photo
Thu 02/07/08 07:21 AM
I had that feeling one time, and lasted for about 2 years. But I had the breakup last week....so brokenheart

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 02/07/08 07:40 AM
Very good girl for an off day seems pretty on to me bigsmile

songstress1's photo
Thu 02/07/08 07:50 AM
Gee wish my off days were this resourceful great poem!!flowerforyou

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Thu 02/07/08 07:56 AM
we've all been known to have off days dont worry ..i dont normally comment on others writings but i do read them and for what its worth i like yours and several others here .but i dont comment any ways ..i havent commented now ,you are not reading this ,make sure you shred this document ..i was never here....laugh

Noden's photo
Thu 02/07/08 09:30 AM

we've all been known to have off days dont worry ..i dont normally comment on others writings but i do read them and for what its worth i like yours and several others here .but i dont comment any ways ..i havent commented now ,you are not reading this ,make sure you shred this document ..i was never here....laugh



Don't worry I won't tell a soul....thanks Tombflowerforyou


Sis, how is, thanks for readingflowerforyou

Texan, thanks for the supportflowerforyou

actually all your nice commentsflowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 02/07/08 09:53 AM
(((((((((((Noden))))))))))))flowerforyou


Noden's photo
Thu 02/07/08 10:34 AM

(((((((((((Noden))))))))))))flowerforyou





(((((((Storm)))))))thanks girlieflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Thu 02/07/08 12:19 PM
ahhh what dreams may come

nice write my dear
great vision


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Noden's photo
Thu 02/07/08 12:27 PM

ahhh what dreams may come

nice write my dear
great vision


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Thank you again my friendflowerforyou flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 02/07/08 02:43 PM
(((Noden))) flowerforyou

Noden's photo
Thu 02/07/08 02:59 PM

(((Noden))) flowerforyou


Thank you, (((((MsTeddy))))flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Thu 02/07/08 07:53 PM
bigsmile

sealove42's photo
Thu 02/07/08 07:59 PM
Nice expression

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Noden's photo
Fri 02/08/08 04:43 AM
((Slow)), sealove, thanks for readingflowerforyou smokin

LAMom's photo
Fri 02/08/08 08:45 AM
:heart: Noden :heart:

Noden's photo
Fri 02/08/08 09:19 AM

:heart: Noden :heart:


Thanks (((Lamom))):heart:

no photo
Fri 02/08/08 09:22 AM
Beautiful Noden!!flowerforyou

Noden's photo
Fri 02/08/08 09:23 AM

Beautiful Noden!!flowerforyou


Thanks baby cakes...flowerforyou

0R3018's photo
Fri 02/08/08 09:56 AM
:cry:
this is really amazing. have you thought of entering your pieces
in some type of contest ? you would def. win.

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