When the time came I started to cry,
As a word was whispered, 'suicide',
Not the answer... not the way out,
I could do nothing but scream and shout,
"Which way to turn,
To live or die,
Where can I hide,
I wish not to face another day"

So now I lay down and pray my first pray,
As I begin to shutter,
I utter, 'good bye',
Good-bye, mom
Good-bye dawn,
I just couldn't figure out the things in my head,

I will not miss the human race,
To the cops this will be, just another case,
And I will be a forgoten face,
So long world,
I am now free to be whatever I wish to be,

But now I see their crying faces,
I have made a grave mistake,
That has changed eveyones fate,
"Why did I do it?" I ask myself,
How can I cause them such great pain?

I am lucky as you see,
The sleep did not over power me!

Nooooooooooo, stay don't do that


this poem is awesome, but I hope you don't really mean this..........


sigh of relief, sorry too early in the morn...hun thanks for pointing that out...

I think you may have missed its meaning. It’s about overcoming suicide, not doing it.

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Okay gottcha now, early morn for me, just catching up in the poem section, been away for a bit...


glad it is an overcome the act instead of doing it....

Awwwwwwwwwh, Recent thanks love that was so charming to hear, I am honored for the kindness in your heart...good morning to you too

that gave me chills.... it was wow

Thank you.

thank you ladies

wow pretty powerful...glad your still here

wow!! An awesome write. I admire you for seeing the light and doing what was right someguy1313

Your poem especially touched me and made me cry..for I had a son who committed suicide 3 1/2 years ago. If only he had seen the tears that I and the rest of the family cried.

^Thanks for sharing....

That is so sad

I am sorry you went through that.

never mind