~Seeing with an Ear~

I'm seeing with my ear
Picturing your smile
In the words that I hear
In that whispered style

Your laughing rings so true
Sounds totally clear
It reaches right on through
And brings your heart near

Your laugh is contagious
So I start in too
Quieting, you confess
I really like you

Warmed by your confession
Don't know what to say
You get the impression
I've been blown away

You ask if I'm alright
I tell you I'm great
In your words I delight
Patiently you wait

For the first time ever
I voice your real name
Failing being clever
I tell you the same

The day has been long
We both are so tired
Hoping I belong
After all has transpired

We tell one another
Nighty night, sleep well
One phone to the other
We say our farewell

I'm seeing with my ear
And hearing you smile
In the words that I hear
In that whispered style

DANG IT GIRL THAT WAS REAL NICE

: )

very pretty LG just make sure that ear isn't tone deaf.LOL

very good girl

its a very good poem lg who ever you wrote it about must be a lucky guy.

thanx everyone that posted :D


and lion, i think im the lucky party here, im cheesy over him, and to
top it off..he's f***ing HOT!!! lmao

then let him know..lol


refer to post under general discussions called just for fun


and awesome poem ellgee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol JT...he knows...

i've told him over the phone, and in this poem :P

Another winner in the site, glad to hear it LG. Good poem too

thnx Gryphn :D

It was long. and exhausing....?

But, hearty and rich in character....loved it...!

thnx Ont :D

im ....touched!