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An Angel With Love
WHo is this angel that stands before me, Whose presence commands, with eyes that look deep? Without so much, A physical touch, My heart is swept clean. Oh how can it be? The impossible has shattered, As my walls bear the strain. My own self denial Beginning to wane. The feeling of new shall never grow old, Grows from within, It's roots taken hold. Who is she, that has touched my own soul? Touching within, With a love that grows bold. She must be an angel, An angel to keep, With love so patient And caring so deep. She stirs hope within me And bids me to live. Taking my heart, Which freely I give. Now from my lungs, A new life thus breathes! With the promise of love What can I do but concede. Fadedspirit 2/3/2008 This wasn't written for anyone special, It just turned out decent, so I decided to post it. |
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Thanks MsTeddyBear!
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Beautiful poem
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Well it is a very good one
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Thanks sugarjen!
Awww, thanks TxsGal......much appreciated. |
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I love the disclaimer at the end Faded. You're right it did indeed turn out "decent".......
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Awww thanks LAMom
LOL DKW thanks.....You trying to make me think more? |
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Thanks for sharing
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You're very welcome sealove!
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Very nice Spirit...well written.
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Thanks Robert.
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I think I'm gonna be rich in flowers! woohoo!
Thanks Noden! |
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