Topic: An Angel With Love
Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 02/03/08 05:03 PM
An Angel With Love

WHo is this angel that stands before me,
Whose presence commands,
with eyes that look deep?
Without so much,
A physical touch,
My heart is swept clean.
Oh how can it be?
The impossible has shattered,
As my walls bear the strain.
My own self denial
Beginning to wane.
The feeling of new shall never grow old,
Grows from within,
It's roots taken hold.
Who is she, that has touched my own soul?
Touching within,
With a love that grows bold.
She must be an angel,
An angel to keep,
With love so patient
And caring so deep.
She stirs hope within me
And bids me to live.
Taking my heart,
Which freely I give.
Now from my lungs,
A new life thus breathes!
With the promise of love
What can I do but concede.

Fadedspirit 2/3/2008

This wasn't written for anyone special,
It just turned out decent, so I decided to post it.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 02/03/08 05:06 PM
flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 02/03/08 05:11 PM
happy Thanks MsTeddyBear!

no photo
Sun 02/03/08 05:42 PM
Beautiful poem:smile:

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 02/03/08 05:46 PM
Well it is a very good one flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 02/03/08 05:57 PM
Thanks sugarjen!:smile:

Awww, thanks TxsGal......much appreciated.flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sun 02/03/08 09:12 PM
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Differentkindofwench's photo
Sun 02/03/08 09:15 PM
laugh laugh laugh I love the disclaimer at the end Faded. You're right it did indeed turn out "decent".......

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 02/03/08 09:33 PM
Awww thanks LAMom

LOL DKW thanks.....You trying to make me think more? :tongue: :smile: laugh

sealove42's photo
Sun 02/03/08 09:40 PM
Thanks for sharing

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 02/03/08 09:50 PM
You're very welcome sealove! happy

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 02/03/08 09:59 PM
Very nice Spirit...well written.

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 02/03/08 10:03 PM
Thanks Robert. :smile:

Noden's photo
Mon 02/04/08 05:15 AM
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Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 02/04/08 05:28 AM
I think I'm gonna be rich in flowers! woohoo!
Thanks Noden! :smile: