Topic: Half inch
manome's photo
Wed 12/06/06 02:05 PM
Half inch
of new snow,
covers the world-
at least,
the little I see.
It's quiet,
peaceful
and serene-
yet there is
turmoil inside,
what avenue to take;
what words to speak,
a mystery-
within my mind
and heart.
Silience,
is a killer
of thr soul-
uncertanity,
a plague to the mind.
That I seek
so much from you, (?)
questions unanswered-
not about you
but me-
that drive the loneliness,
deeper to a bone crushing
reality,
tis to be loved
like no other,
a knowledge
I do not know.

karmafury's photo
Wed 12/06/06 02:06 PM
Never give up on seeking that love.

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Wed 12/06/06 02:07 PM
Whoa Manome that was awesome!!

michael1313's photo
Wed 12/06/06 02:33 PM
if you seek from heart and mind,
th' love you seek, you will find,
show your love,feel her power,
let her be your finest hour.......good works.....M1313

lonelyteardrop's photo
Wed 12/06/06 10:16 PM
very beautiful poem

no photo
Wed 12/06/06 10:30 PM
YEP... THAT WAS NICE.

no photo
Thu 12/07/06 10:03 AM
very nice Shad..

Mike.... nice follow up ;o)