Topic: Night Run
klugman's photo
Mon 01/21/08 12:35 AM
Misty shadows surround me
I'm In a forest, its dark you see
I'm running now, scared a sound
My little feet start to pound the ground
Moving shadows beyond the gloom
They convince me of my impending doom
Runnin faster now my fear is sudden
Looking like a blur my feet are runnin
Sounds behind me quicken my pace
It seems as though I'm losing this race
Driveway close the light is near.
Still the sounds are close I hear
Claws tearing at my legs, and back
Barely missing me in the black
At the mailbox now I'm safe
I dare not look back into its face.

DB
01/19/2008

LAMom's photo
Mon 01/21/08 07:04 AM
sometimes we must face the shadows in order to move forward in life,,,

Awesome write flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 01/21/08 07:29 AM
good oneflowerforyou

Never let the shadows over take you.bigsmile

klugman's photo
Mon 01/21/08 08:46 AM
Thanks yall...flowerforyou

Its about a very vivid childhood memory...

ArtGurl's photo
Mon 01/21/08 09:24 AM
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Noden's photo
Mon 01/21/08 04:06 PM
Sounds to me, like you might be running from yourself...we all have ghost from within...

smokin nice read

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 01/21/08 04:14 PM
that was good Klugman...hope it wasn't too vicious.