suddenly you are there and I am thrown into a tailspin
starving for your touch
I stay sedentary on the outside
screaming on the inside to be set free in your presence
I look into your eyes
and like a moth to the flame you draw me in
Not seeing how I feel
you are aloof
yet physically offering a possibility
where before I had only dreams
A flower bursting forth from the ice in the spring thaw
you invade my conscience
as the mere thought of you takes up residence
in the forefront of my mind
you could have me
such as I am
a bonfire raging inside a paper lantern
hoping only to shed light on you for a moment
but in my heart I know with a smile directed my way
you could have me
such as I am


ever been in such awe at the beauty it left you moved like a muse had kissed you?
the taste never leaves you lips remains easy to recall

do you write or something?

Just this and some script work for shorts this I do for.. well lets call it therapy. cause I think writing it has kept me from doing some pretty crazy things

If you like I have more of this style, I've been single for some time after some ugliness in the past, so gathered some of these moments but never really found a place for them. we'll see how it goes I would like some valuable insight or response would be helpful

funny you'd think it would at least be on the list today curious these posting tricks and traps

Love the imagery, the rhythm and the speed! I hope to read more of you...

Welcome

welcome to the site

nice work

Nicely done Welcome to the site..

very good welcome to the site