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((((( Robert & Dena ))))) Life is a journey a journey you two souls have embarked on The road ahead is bright and within your souls you two shall soar ... Hugs   Thank you so much Denise for your well wishes for Dena and me...and it is looking brighter. |
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Very touching and profound Robert......
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Edited by
Ghostrider2u
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Tue 01/15/08 06:42 PM
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Definately like the way you put it together wolfy.....nice peice!!!
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I can't believe how much a five minute write up can get so many great comments. I guess it was the emotion I was feeling at the moment for this one. Thanks ya'll for making me shine on this one.
Thanks Kitty...two profounds for one poem..boy that's a record for me. Thanks Gar...I appreciate that comment...it didn't take much to put it together. |
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good job
neat
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I Am Not The Enemy The feelings I fight In this battle of emotions, My mind keeps swirling With all these commotions. Bitter thoughts and words Of the past do dwell, Keeping my guard up Of the feelings that fell. I am not the enemy Of a war I fought, The explosions of battle That drained my thoughts. Being a victor to overcome What was a bitter past, To walk in stride To go forward at last. ((( R ))) kind of short for you but very poignant i like it just leave it in the past and follow the path you two have started good one my friend |
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We all have off days Wolfeyes, but that's what makes us unmistakably human. Keep your head up brother and keep up the beautiful writing.
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Thank you Robin...Thank you Faded...I appreciate the kind comments...
KC...yeah it was short and not myself...but it seems like it was one of my more powerful statements. I'm back to myself now. And thank for your wishes for Dena and I. |
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Good one Robert
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wow Robert really good
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Thank you as always Barb....
And Pam...thanks sweetie, it's good to see you back. |
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Another nice read, Robert...
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Another nice read, Robert... Thank you as always sweetie. |
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