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Topic: I Am Not The Enemy
Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 01/14/08 07:17 PM
I Am Not The Enemy The feelings I fight In this battle of emotions, My mind keeps swirling With all these commotions. Bitter thoughts and words Of the past do dwell, Keeping my guard up Of the feelings that fell. I am not the enemy Of a war I fought, The explosions of battle That drained my thoughts. Being a victor to overcome What was a bitter past, To walk in stride To go forward at last.

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 01/14/08 07:18 PM
good job

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 01/14/08 07:19 PM
good job Thanks Mirror....just a little off kilter tonight.

soxfan94 Joined Mon 05/28/07 Posts: 3384	Mon 01/14/08 07:20 PM
Wow. Profound. Nice work

tsw123 Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 380	Mon 01/14/08 07:20 PM
Very good!! btw, Robert, how's that no smoking going?

IndnPrncs Joined Sun 11/04/07 Posts: 58420	Mon 01/14/08 07:20 PM
Great Robert!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76438	Mon 01/14/08 07:21 PM
good one Robert

a4leafclover2u2 Joined Thu 01/10/08 Posts: 153	Mon 01/14/08 07:22 PM
sporty..

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 01/14/08 07:25 PM
Thanks Soxfan...that's a first...but appreciate it. Thanks Tammy....not so good, it lasted a week. Thanks Princess...I knew you would be here. Thanks Kristi..always can count on you as well. Thanks 4leaf...that one is a first too.. Thank you all, that was something that just came up in the last ten minutes because I am not feeling my usual self tonight..it will get better.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 01/14/08 07:29 PM
Here here

soxfan94 Joined Mon 05/28/07 Posts: 3384	Mon 01/14/08 07:29 PM
Thanks Soxfan...that's a first...but appreciate it. surprised to hear that. keep up the good work.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 01/14/08 07:32 PM
Thanks Soxfan...that's a first...but appreciate it. surprised to hear that. keep up the good work. No not surprised...just never been called profound before... Thanks Susan...I appreciate your comments as well.

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Mon 01/14/08 08:33 PM
{{{{{{Robert}}}}}} You keep those doubts out of your head...

blonderockermom Joined Wed 08/08/07 Posts: 6886	Mon 01/14/08 08:36 PM
Wonderful....as usual..

songstress1 Joined Sun 11/18/07 Posts: 1244	Tue 01/15/08 05:48 AM
Free at last from the torments that bind. Looking back should never cross our minds. Free to be you Free to be me Free to be "us" as it was meant to be. see now I was inspired thank you darlin

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Tue 01/15/08 06:44 AM
Free at last from the torments that bind. Looking back should never cross our minds. Free to be you Free to be me Free to be "us" as it was meant to be. see now I was inspired thank you darlin Thanks sweetheart...I needed that uplift.

songstress1 Joined Sun 11/18/07 Posts: 1244	Tue 01/15/08 06:46 AM
Free at last from the torments that bind. Looking back should never cross our minds. Free to be you Free to be me Free to be "us" as it was meant to be. see now I was inspired thank you darlin Thanks sweetheart...I needed that uplift. Nope "we" needed it.

songstress1 Joined Sun 11/18/07 Posts: 1244	Tue 01/15/08 06:46 AM
Free at last from the torments that bind. Looking back should never cross our minds. Free to be you Free to be me Free to be "us" as it was meant to be. see now I was inspired thank you darlin Thanks sweetheart...I needed that uplift. Nope "we" needed it.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Tue 01/15/08 06:46 AM
Thanks Jo...those doubts are disapating..I think I spelled that right. Thanks Rhonda...always good to hear from you.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 01/15/08 07:57 AM
((((( Robert & Dena ))))) Life is a journey a journey you two souls have embarked on The road ahead is bright and within your souls you two shall soar ... Hugs