Topic: And I still know you
jadedmelody's photo
Sat 01/12/08 03:23 AM
In loving memory of my father.

I dedicate this to Danial Wayne Hollinsworth. I'll be seeing you.

Rain fall coats the world in wondrous dew
Time strangely altered, moments pass as though on cue
I dance through puddles, splashing any who dare pass
Engulfed in a droplet paradise, just emulating class!
My appearance severely unkempt; this I do not deny
In a nearby puddle, a smudged reflection floats by


Familiar eyes gaze upon me, glistening with life
Upon closer inspection, I glimpse a look of strife
Just a reflection of myself, yet you must be from afar
Strangers would see me, but I know who you are
A time long forgotten courses through my soul
Diamond memories, so long simply of coal


Dimensions cross, old & new are now one
Together once again, our acquaintance no longer done
Life escaped you, as though you were a mere pawn
But our love binds us still, as dark & light bound by dawn
Now you hide inside of me, for this has always been true
Father you are apart of me, and I still know you

Zackattack's photo
Sat 01/12/08 03:27 AM
god bless your dad very nice poem brought tears to my eyes

Karorine's photo
Sat 01/12/08 03:37 AM

In loving memory of my father.

I dedicate this to Danial Wayne Hollinsworth. I'll be seeing you.

Rain fall coats the world in wondrous dew
Time strangely altered, moments pass as though on cue
I dance through puddles, splashing any who dare pass
Engulfed in a droplet paradise, just emulating class!
My appearance severely unkempt; this I do not deny
In a nearby puddle, a smudged reflection floats by


Familiar eyes gaze upon me, glistening with life
Upon closer inspection, I glimpse a look of strife
Just a reflection of myself, yet you must be from afar
Strangers would see me, but I know who you are
A time long forgotten courses through my soul
Diamond memories, so long simply of coal


Dimensions cross, old & new are now one
Together once again, our acquaintance no longer done
Life escaped you, as though you were a mere pawn
But our love binds us still, as dark & light bound by dawn
Now you hide inside of me, for this has always been true
Father you are apart of me, and I still know you



Very beautiful, sorry about your lost.

cindy_tragic's photo
Sat 01/12/08 03:42 AM
This is so beautiful and very well written.
Thank you so much for sharing this, I enjoyed it immensely.
Youre very talented, the best writings are the ones from the soul
Bravo!flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 01/12/08 04:12 AM
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL.............THERE'S NO LOVE LIKE A FATHERS LOVE, I'M SO SORRY FOR UR LOSS, I'M SURE UR FATHER IS SOOOOOO PROUD OF U HUN WELL DONE. ALL THE BEST FOR UR FUTURE XXXX

BonnyMiss's photo
Sat 01/12/08 04:18 AM
Oh how sweet the memory
The one who gave my life to me
A parent's worth more than gold
Encased in love and care untold
This life,this journey for which
we are truly thankful
Made possible by parents,
we humbly grateful...................

God bless all parents.flowerforyou


LAMom's photo
Sat 01/12/08 10:35 AM
Love & Light flowerforyou :heart: